dark alley(revelation) ch 1 rewrite

standing in front of my fathers house the
sky is getting dark,i looked up enjoying
the view of the twilight for it has been lo
ng since i last enjoyed such a view.tod
ay five years ago my father died the doc
tor said it was some sort of animal atta
ck for his trout was ripped open and his
body was like death itself,i was only 10
when he died and now am in high sch
ool.i started walking to my friend’s hous
e then i saw a man forcing
a young girl in her later teen to a lonely
area by the street, he seem not to take
notice of me so i followed him trying ha
rd not to be seen the man trew her on t
he floor, pinned her down as he forced a
brutal kiss to her lips.he tied her mouth w
ith a cloth and like a beast ripped off her cl
othing as she screamed but it was useles
s.he slapped her by the face and started su
cking on her ”c” sized barest at that point i r
ealized how turned on i was, but instead i d
ecided to call it all quit with the drama and
help the poor dark haired,pale & beautiful girl.

used me,she pushed him off her, stood up
said “all you men are the-same, you are
all the time yet you don’t value the opposite sex,you are

ery selfish and cruel that is why i will have a
conscience” she moved up to him and
a wet kiss. The wet kiss seem to last
when thy started striping each other and they flay on
ground with the man laying on top of her.
started on the nipples playing with the left
sucking the right as she started morning
she said ” stop teasing and and fuck me like you
never fuck again”. At this point even
i cannot see the mans face i am sure he
be surprised as much as i am(knowing
few munites ago she was literally
to this area and showed resistance to the best of her
).

Like a flash he jammed himself fully into her
she sreemed but the man was fast enough
put his hand over her mouth so the

nted to get my cork out and stroke it for it
Beginning to hurt,but i stayed put because if
eventually got found out i would not look
embarrassing,i watched as he started with
long strokes and then all of a sudden lost
and
fucking her with full fast strokes and in a
munites she announced that she was
to cum, with strength that i can’t seem to
where it come from she rolled over him and

riding him fast and in a munite or so she started
and fell on him still riding him,and the man
screaming.my dick wanted to burst at the view
she rose her head in pleasure, that is when i
those canine teeth and the horror of blood all
her face.i dashed out from the area not minding
noticed and ran as fast as my leg could take me ho
me…..

The next day

I woke up and hoped that yesterdays incident was
a dream so i prepared for school took breakfast
mom and aunt Betty and was off to school. It
a new section and new students are arriving to
school so since am not begin noticed by the girls
school, a new catch would be a good thig,that is
this hot pale skinned girl entred the school gate
with load of stuffs so walked to her and offered
and she handed me a box before looking up. I al
most jumped out of my skin its that face, that terrible
killer’s face

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