Mad Love
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MAD LOVE
I am madly in love with you
I don’t know you well enough to be…but I am
My body craves your touch
my lips beg for your kiss
My eyes purge themselves on your beauty
You are in my fantasies by day
My dreams by night
You are the first thing I think of when I wake
My last thought as I close my eyes to sleep
I live my life to worship you
I am unimportant unless you are content
If I do not please you
Tell me how I may do so
I will gladly crawl on my knees until I have accomplished your desire.
—February 24, 2000
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But if you think about it. The person speaking these words really is slightly obsessed. They want to feast on their obsession as much as possible. Even if that means over indulging to the point to purging.
I knew what the word meant and knew what I was wanting to express when using it.
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maybe a verb that takes something like devour, since the light actually goes into the eye. Or maybe eagerly do something. These words seem full of goodness.
My eyes devour the essence of your beauty
My eyes eagerly discern your beauty at every chance
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