This is my first story and it isnt finsehd yet, i’ve posted as much as i’ve done and i’d like some feedback on it, should i continue with this story or sart something new. thanks.

The last gasp of pleasure is screamed from aimee’s body as the body on her grunts there release into her, kissing her softly and leaves her asleep on her bed.

Aimee, someone who everybody wants to know, yet only a few people do is something of a sex machine, she knows how and where to get it. At the party last night, she caught the eye of Jak, a lonely long haired guy, whos depression seems to be fueled on drugs and the lust of a cheep shag. The moment he saw Aimee, in her high pink heels, her bare legs leading up to tiny, tight red hotpants with a tiny thong being shown, and her firm, ample unbra’d breasts forced into a black lowcut top, he was in love, and he knew he had to had her.

Jak went outside, joint in hand and rested on the curb, alone. He heard the clink of heels behind him and turning his head he saw, hand in hand, Aimee and her friend, complete in miniskirt, knee high boots and a tiny bra. He turned his head back and stood up, takign a long drag before offering some to Aimee and Melissa, who shared a long drag. Aimee with her pefect hands gave the spilff back to jaks hand, and kisses him softly, then Melissa repeats this action. In moments they both turn around and before Jak know’s it, their gone, leaving Jak in the darkness, throbbing erection in his jeans. He turns to head home, and relises a piece of paper around his spilff, he opens it out and reads.

“Playground, 8, ten bag.” Jak Smiles to himself and walks the long trip home happy. He turns the key to his flat door open and the moment his door is locked behind him, he falls asleep on his bed. Hours later, he’s awoken by the knock on his door, 3 heavy thuds and the doors open. A simple exchange of a white bag for a green note is done and the doors locked. Jak opens the bad and sniffs, he smells the weed and seals the bag, and he heads to the shower.

“Aimee?” says Melissa, lying next to her naked lover.
“Yes Mia?” Replys Aimee, holding her baby’s hand.
“Jak, are you sure you want to…” Mia says.
“Are you sure you want to?” Aimee cuts arcoss.
“Yes,” Mia wispers as she leans to kiss aimee.
Aimee breaks the kiss, and says “We need him.” And leans into Mia, kissing her soflty, sliding her hand up and down the curves of Mia’s lush body. Mia rolls ontop of Aimee and sldies her tounge around hers, while her hands rub up and down Aimee’s perfectly sized boobs and nipples. Aimee softly moans into the kiss as Mia rubs her figners softly over her nipples, before Mia brakes the kiss and moves down her body, kissing down her body until she finds Aimee shaved clit. Aimee reaches down and pushes Mia’s head to her clit as she feels her tounge licking firmly up and down and round. Aimee sldies both of her hands to her nipples and rubs then as she moans softly, while Mia’ slides down and slides all of her tougne in her, then around her pussy and her entrace faster and faster. Aimee feels Mia getting faster as she moans, feeling the orgasm building up and shes is going to happen. Mia stops licking Aimee out and slides her middle finger deep inside Aimee, she cuvers it upwords and finds a small patch of thicker skin, she rubs it softly as Aimee tries hard not to scream out. Mia pulls her finger out fast and feel’s Aimees jucie all over her body. Mia leans into Aimee and kisses her, before lying down on Aimee’s breast and falls asleep, smiling.

Jak dresses himself, making sure he keeps the ten bag within his wallet, and lets himself out of the flat and walks to the old playground, keep his head down making sure no one sees his face. He jumps over the rusty gate and sits down to swing, and quietly talks to himself, he wonders if this is going to be the time he fianlly gets to have Aimee, if not Aimee, Mia, either one will do.

*A long beep*

“Aimee!” Shouts Mia, “We are going to be late, Aimee?” *She bends over and pinches her still hard nipple, leading Amy to grin and say…
“Knew I could make you do it,” She says with a kinky simle. Aimee slides out off bed gracefully, before heading to the shower, maving sure Mia see’s her fine ass cheeks move, tempting her to follow her. She steps into the shower and before she turns the knob, Mia’s behind her, rubbing Aimee’s tight clit, making her softly moan. The pass the shower head around each other, washing each other, Aimee bites down on Mia’s ear and whispers, “Let me pay you back for last night,” and before Mia can even nod her head, the shower head is being forced on her clit, a cold finger rubbing her nipple. Mia gasp’s slightly before leaning back into Aimees open legs, moaning more and more while she guides Aimee’s hand and fingers down to her soaking clit. Mia moans even more as feels her clit getting roughly fingered and the powerful shower head on her clit, leading her to a epic orgasm, adding alot of her own jucies to the water. She reaches over and turns off the shower, before sliding open the door and rabbing herself in a pink fluffly towel, drying her hair and body.