An African Farm Story Part 1
My introduction into deviant sex by a family
My introduction into deviant sex by a family
this happened years ago when I was a delivery driver
This kind of happened to me… in a way…
After not seeing Marilee in 35 years. I finally found her on Facebook and fly out to California to meet her. I find out she has a daughter and things took a strange turn.
From fear of death, to Sex, to war, to love
AT our 35th class reunion I run into a girl/woman I had a super crush on in high school.
This is just the start, but here’s the first part of my first story. I plan on having it actually finished by New Year’s Eve, so keep an eye out for more! Constructive criticism greatly appreciated.
You may need to read the others to fully grasp this story
6 months later….Â
I wake up to my cell phone ringing at 3am i look at my caller ID it’s Julie
“Hello Jim hello hello”Â
“hello Julie what’s wrong”
“can I come over”
“sure what’s wrong”Â
“I I I can’t tell you”
“baby I love you I’m getting dressed right now I’ll be there in a couple of minutes please tell me what’s wrong”Â
“I’ll tell you when we get back to your house ok”
At this Time I noticeably hear her softly crying and sobbing her voice is wobbly and scared
“Julie I’m getting in my car I’ll be there in 2 minutes ok”Â
“Jim please don’t hang up”(full out crying)
“Julie calm down I’m not going to hang up ok baby I love you”
By this time I’m getting upset I can’t stand to hear her crying it makes me feel like I got punched in the stomach i hop in my 93 v8 5.0 fox body ford mustang that my parents bought for me for a birthday present I start it and tear out of my drive way she lives a mile and a half away I sped all the way there I turn right onto her street almost hitting a light post I screech to a halt in front of her house she’s sitting in her drive way her head between her knees crying against the garage door i jump out of my car and run to her I pick up from there
“Julie baby I’m here”Â
“Jim”(in-between sobs)
without hesitation I pick her up and place her in my passenger seat and roar into the night and take her into my house I carried her down the hall while she’s sobbing into my shoulder and her arms are around my neck I get into my room and place her on the bed gently I let her lay there for about an hour all the lights off and me sitting in my computer chair tears rolling down my face cause of how sad she is and how bad I feel because she’s crying I feel helpless I don’t know what’s wrong finally she calls my nameÂ
“Jim”Â
“yeah Julie”Â
“can you turn the light on”
“yes baby”(I turn the light on)
What I see next enrages me her right cheek bone area is red swollen and brused I walk up to her
“what the hell happened Julie”
“please don’t be mad”
“JULIE WHAT HAPPENED”
“my dad hit me”
“I’ll kill that basterd”(grabbing my keys)
“no baby no I told him I’m not ever going back to that house again I wanna live with you and your family can I”
“I don’t know but I’m not loseing you if they say no we will get our own place but my parents and siblings love you so I don’t think they’ll say no”Â
“Jim I love you not just love but am in love with you it’s a feeling deep within me it makes me feel complete noone has ever made or will make me feel like this except for you”(tears rolling down her face in pain but also in pure love)
“Julie iv seen you since 6th grade and have been going out with you for 6 months my 8th and 9th grade years you’ve brought me more happyness these months then in my whole life your what I live for who I live for the essence of my life in one word is you you helped me when I had a broken ankle through my physical therapy my ankle is stronger I enjoyed the whole summer not bits and pieces your the most beautiful girl in the world and i love you as much as the earth loves the sun ”
We lay there quietly until she falls asleep looking into my eyes I soon get up cover her up and walk into the bathroom and take a nice hot shower then head into the kitchen. I start making coffee and breakfast for my mom and dad so I can talk to them about Julie. mom and dad walk into the dining room ready for work
“mom dad”Â
“yeah”Â
“julies over she’s in my room her dad hit her and I went and got her early this morning ”
“WHAT is she ok ”
“yea a bit shaken up but I got her to calm down she’s sleeping I got a real serious question I have to ask both of you”Â
“what is it Jim””go ahead son”
“can she live here with me I mean us”(a second long pause)
“it’s ok with me “” of course she can I want her living here then with an abusive father”
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“thanks mom dad I love you guys so much this means so much to me and her ”Â
“love you to Jim” “love ya son can you cut the grass today”Â
“sure dad mom I’m letting you know were not going to school for a couple of days ok”
“ok”
Right then my brother kc and sister zoey walk into the room he’s 10 she’s 7Â
“hey guys I wanna let you know Julie will be living with us from now on ok”Â
“why?”
“it’s a long story I might be able tell it to you if it’s ok with her but not right now get to school (wispering into their ears that I’ll pick them up early to get burgers an ice cream”)Â
I’m not an average teen I love my brother and sister alot they don’t annoy me and I like treating them to nice things when I can I keep my room for the most part clean and wash my dog porkchop everyday and keep myself trimmed up and sharp looking.
A couple hours later I’m watching overhauling and I hear foot steps and my name being calledÂ
“Jim”Â
“yeah Julie ”
“did you talk to your parents and can you get me an ice pack baby” Â (while sitting on the couch and changed into one of my big shirts)
“yes I did and sure” (handing her an ice pack and towel)
“and what did they say”Â
“they said absolutely they had no problem with it”
“thank you baby this means so much”
“don’t thank me thank them”
“I will”
” hey I told k and zoey that your living with us now they asked why I told them it has to be ok with you for me to tell them”
“it’s ok with me I wanna teach them correct way to hande things”Â
“ok I told them I’d pick them up early from school today”
I lifted the ice pack off of her face to check the point of impact
 it was a bit swollen but she had a little bruising just a little noticeable skin discoloration but all in allÂ
ok I removed the ice pack and planted a soft kiss as soon as I did this she turned and faced me a twinkle in her eyes and I leaned in and kissed her on the lips she kissed back
We sat there for 25/30 minutes just kissing and wiggling our hands all over each others bodiesÂ
my hand works up under her shirt I cup her b cup tits and rub and pinch her nipples she’s moaning with extacy
 I tweak each nipple and she shutters through multiple mini orgasms
 then I take one had and move her thong to her mid thigh and place my hand over her slit not touching her but I can feel the radiating heat from her short neatly trimmed pussyÂ
that makes me get a horrible case of blue balls and my dick hurts but I’m saving every last drop of my seamen to enter my goddess my one my whole part of living Julie
 I place a finger in my mouth and moisten it up and slide it slowly and sensually into her warm wet love hole I find her g spot I just graze it she moans from deep in her throat while shuttering
 then without notice I full on rub her g spot and clit at the same time she let’s out a loud moan of lust while bucking her hips
 I remove my finger and lick her love hole long and deep while rubbing her clit
 I speed up the pace in minutes I have her moaning beyond belief a loud but deep at the same time she’s bucking her hips
She let’s out a scream of pure pleasureÂ
as she has a hard orgasm she wraps her legs around my head and leans foreword encasing my whole head with her body spasiming as one beautiful function of pure pleasure this lasts 5 long beautiful miniutes while I’m sucking all of her juices in she starts to come down from her highÂ
she lays back on the couch catching her breath while still twitching from her orgasmÂ
After a few moments she said
“oh my god Jim that’s the hardest iv ever cum I’m still twitching and I barely can feel my legs”
“good I like to know I did a good job I also think you needed that to ease your mind ”Â
“it’s eased alright oh lookey here you havnt even undid your pants yet” (grabbing my 7 1/2 inch by 3 1/2 inch cock sending electricity straight through me )
” i couldn’t muster any words out her speed of undoing my pants was un matched even by my self soon enough my cock rocketed into view springing back n forth a couple of times before standing at attention she places her finger on the top of the helmet and said
“your an eager soljer arnt you”
I’m laying there desperate for relief then to my relief a wet warm mouths surrounded my cock I almost bust my nuts right there but I controlÂ
I get the best blow job of my life it lasts a horrifyingly long 15 minutes quicker slower deep throat just the helmet with handsÂ
finally I tell her to stop not wanting to but having to so I can fulfill my lusts my desiresÂ
“get on your back”(she listens)Â
“Jim shove that solid peice of man meat into my pussy “(all I need to hear)
With one slow continuous action I bury my cock into her tight pussy she milks me I wanna cum so bad she’s up and moaning like a banshee again I focus
I pull out and then slam right back in within 2 minutesshe came 3 times and I’m dying for realease but wanna cum with Julie Â
I only have to wait for her 5th orgasm for 20 seconds before feelng the muscles in her love hole start to contract she screams in pure extacy hugs me tight and in the sexyest voice I ever herdÂ
“cum with me baby put your baby milk in me” that sent me past the point of no return I jolted once spewing so hard I went numb in all my extremities except the one I was using and passed outÂ
 I awoke 10 minutes later with a clearly over satisfied  girlfriend looking at me lovingly I kissed her and said
 “that’s never happened to me before” she said
“it’s nice to know I did a good job”
“did you ever”
We laughed togetherÂ
“well I got to go get kc and zoey you wanna come”
“sure”Â
We went and picked them up and ate she told the story to them and told them to never let our parents hit us unless it’s spanking has to be a good reason and never to hit their child unless it’s spanking
 while she was telling them this I was looking at her she was glowing her blue eyes sparkled her blond hair fluttered in the cool sea breeze air on this warm florida day
 she was so damn beautiful how did this beautiful creature find her way to me
 why was I lucky to find the most beautiful intelligent sociable girl and she was all mine my best friend my girl friend and my middle school sweet heartÂ
I’ll probably never kno why nor do I care to find out all I know is I love her with all of my soulÂ
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She knew he was coming. He told her last night. He told her to wake up at 7:00, get naked, unlock the door and get back in bed. It was 6:45. She loved the tease.
This is continued from story 6, but you don’t need to read story 6 to enjoy this.
Wife and I have our first “non-family” threesome with my best friend
Kristin asks her step dad for some advice
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Now that I had fucked my God daughter – I needed to smooth things over.
I learned how to be a better lover
As always, I apologize if the use of drugs offends. Please leave comments, especially if voting negative. I truly wish to improve and desire feedback to assist me.
This is the intro to our swinging experiences. I’ll lay out the basics of what we learned first in this account. At the end you’ll hear about that magical first night at “the club.”
Things constantly change for Sarah
This is my true story of how I got to where I am today.
Note: This is a continuation of my stories I have been writing, go back and read the others.
I opened my eyes only to be blinded by the sun sparkling off the water. I got really confused as to where I was I shot upright. When I did this the little paddleboat toppled over sending me overboard. The water hit my face. It reminded me of the water from the water park, on that fateful day that I met Mark. Wait. Mark. Where was he? We fell asleep in this boat! I swam to the dock and climbed on. I looked up. There he was. My blonde babe. He was wearing swim trunks and was on his boat. The sun gleamed on his tan skin and defined his abs. Thank you god I whispered to myself.
I walked over to the boat. âGood morning sunshineâ he said sarcastically. âShut upâ I said. He laughed. âWhat are you doing?â. âI am preparing the boat to go for a rideâ he said. âWhere are you going?â I asked. âWE are going to go to a remote little island I found in the middle of the lakeâ. He said. This sounded not only fun, but romantic. âYou should go back to the house and grab your things, mine are already in the cabin in the boat.â The boat was large. It had a large cabin under it with a large deck. A few steps up were the controls and in front was a hot tub. What does this kids parents do? I asked myself.
When I got back and he untied the ropes, we were off. âHow far away is it?â I asked. âAbout a day or so, donât worry though, the ride will be worth itâ he said with a smile. I got up and went on down to the cabin. It was amazing. There was oak everywhere with a large bed in the back, a large bathroom on the side, and a kitchenette on the side. There was a tv and sofa in the middle. I went and sat down on the couch and watched the tv. Why not take a little nap?
When I woke up the sun was setting. Shit! Had I really fallen asleep and stayed that way? I better go explain. When I walked up to the deck I looked around. The sky was beautiful. Orange and pink spun everywhere and the sun was resting behind two clouds. I walked up to the wheel only to find mark not there. I panicked. âMARKâ I yelled. No answer. I tried again. No answer. I than calmed down when I realized that we were anchored. Phew. I ran around to the front and looked around. Mark was stepping into the hot tub. He was naked. I was as his beautiful butt lowered into the hot tub and his sausage dangled in between his legs. Damn. I stripped and then joined him. âMark I am so sorry, I fell asleep and didnât know how long I would be asleep.â âJer, chillâ he said. âIts ok babe, I wanted you to rest for the big night tonight.â He is so sweet, and Jer? I liked that.
We talked for awhile and then he scooted closer. The sun had set and it was now dark. The only light was that from the hot tub. He put his hand on my thigh and leaned in. We started to make out. But there was something different. There was a new passion in his kiss, a hunger. It turned me on. I responded to the best of my ability. He traveled up my thigh and grabbed my dick. He began to jack me off and I did the same to him. After a few minutes I began to breathe heavily. My balls began to tighten. He stopped and pulled away.
He got out and walked down the way and into the cabin. I collected my breath and followed. When I walked in he was on the bed. I walked over and he pulled me down. He kissed my whole body passionetly. He flipped me over and began to eat my ass. It was amazing. He kept going at it before spitting in my ass. Before I knew it, he shoved his dick inside me and began to pump. His hunger from before was being unleashed. I began to meet his thrusts and our thrusts both met at the right time. He kept pumping and pumping. HE began to grunt and breathe heavily. He tightened up. He thrust and pulled my ass to him and shot rope after rope of cum. What seemed like forever finally came to an end.
He flipped me back over and started to suck my dick. The cum drained out of my ass. When my dick was hard he positioned his ass over my dick and went down on it. He began to bounce up and down and I thrusted. He went harder and harder and I couldnât take it anymore. I began to cum vigorously. He took it and kept going causing my orgasm to continue. When I was down he climbed off and went down on me, kissing me furiously. He continued kissing me and I kissed back. It started to turn into a wrestling match when he pinned me down and kissed me more. He took both are dicks and jerked them off together. âFuckâ I panted. âI want every last dropâ he said. The hunger in him was unbelievable, it made me want him even more. I wanted more than I already have. I began to cum and shortly after he did. He fell on top of me and kissed me more. He kept going and going. He trailed down me and started to lick all the cum off of me. I couldnât believe his passion. It was fucking hot. When he came back up and kissed me, he put cum I nmy mouth too. The mixture was delicious.
He fell off and we both panted. We crawled under the sheets and he cuddled me and kissed my neck. âLike I said earlier, I donât think I will ever be done with youâ he said. âMe fucking either. I love youâ I said. âNo, I love you.â
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This is part 2 of this story and starts where I left off. Thank you to those who voted and provided feedback. I hope you enjoy this second part of the 20 year old Jenny and her brother Paulâs story. If you havenât read part one it is mistakenly called âA series of co-incidentsâ LoL I corrected that to âco-incidencesâ with this chapter. I recommend you read part one first and if you like it come back here. Please keep voting and providing feedback.
The day was glorious – sunny and bright and I was going to be stuck at the University planning for a conference. On my way into the city on the train I wondered how Aliâs day would go. She was planning to sunbath and work on a tan. She had a short workout and a little steam and drug out the sun lounger from the shed and set it up in the sun. It was a hand-made wooden affair from the local trees. We have had two of them for years. She laid out her nice and plush bath towel and oiled herself up and laid down for the sun. We are not overlooked as we are at the top of the hill with both neighbours down the hillside from us. Ali locked the side gates so anyone calling would have to ring the bell and couldnât just walk in on her. She took these precautions because she was nude and wanted to get a tan without any tan marks so she could wear her more revealing tops. Before long she was nice and warm and began playing with her pussy spreading the lips and rubbing her clit.
She had been there about an hour and felt like a tea and opened her eyes and was about to get up when she saw a figure towering over her next to the lounger. âI see you still use the lounger I made for you.â It was the Romany gypsy named Alf who had coppiced the woods around us a few years ago. They came around every few years to work the woods. Ali realised she was nude at this point and tried to cover up her breasts.
âHow long have you been here Alf?â
âA few minutes â thatâs all.â Long enough for him to have a good look and see Ali playing with her pussy. âWe are camped down at the bottom like always â is okay?â
âYes of course. Can I get you anything?â Ali normally gave them a little food during the week they were here. Alf just kept staring directly at Aliâs pussy. She figured what the hell and put her arms back up on the chair arms. Allowing her breasts to stand alone. Her nipples were hard and standing at attention for him to see – glistening in the sun with oil and little beads of sweat. It was obvious she was turned on exposing herself to this burly man. She put her hand back down to her pussy. Alf sat down next to her on the edge of the lounger.
âI see you lose weight â look very nice.â Alf was never a man of too many words. He cupped one of her breasts. âVery nice.â He pinched her nipple and then he stood up. âNo we donât need anything.â Ali was taken aback that he didnât go further or linger on her breast and nipple.
âHowâs your wife?â Ali could only stammer at this point with lust in her voice.
âWife passed on two years now.â
âOh I am so sorry to hear that â and your son?â
âHe is with me at camp.â Ali remembered his son Bret â a strapping six foot lad of 18 â heâd be 21 or 22 by now.
âMaybe Iâll drop down later â do you still have the caravan?â
âNo â wagon we sell and horses â have motorhome now â too many regulations from government â make gypsy life hard.â Alf was a traditional Romany gypsy or tinker as they were known in the old days. Not to be confused with the modern day Pikey or traveller. He worked for his living – not taking hand-outs from the welfare state. They would coppice the woods, burn wood to make charcoal to sell for BBQs and make furniture, which they sold at the local market. In a week they would be gone on to the next woodland. Everyone local benefited from the renewed woodland. They hadnât been for a while and the woods were getting over grown. Ali couldnât help think about how forward Alf had been in touching her breasts and pinching her nipple. Probably with his wife gone the poor man was horny. She would have to do something about that later.
She lay there for another half an hour and worked her pussy into a nice orgasm. The she showered and went to her dressing room to choose an appropriate outfit. Nothing that screamed fuck me Alf â but something that would let him know she was available. She decided on a lovely cream coloured knee length linen skirt with an elasticated waist band. She put on a matching string strap top in nice light cotton. No bra and definitely no panties. The material was not quite see through – but enough to show her assets off and give the right message. The thought of Alf fucking her made her pussy tingle. He was a stout man with well-defined muscles. Not overly tall but very athletic and thick in his arms and legs. He looked like a rugby player and man was he hairy. He smelled woody and musty â her nipples were hard thinking of Alf on top of her pumping his cock deep in her womb. She thought for a second that she was being predatory and that made a smile come across her face.
Ali made her way down the slope to their usual camp location. Because of the rains the paths were all wiped out but she could see a small vehicle up the opposite hill. Some motorhome â it was actually a converted delivery van with a chimney sticking out the top. There was smoke coming from the chimney â Alf was in. She walked up the hill to the van and knocked on the door.
âCome in.â Alf usually got straight to the point. Ali opened the door and stepped up into the van. She stood with her legs separated because she knew the light coming from behind her would show through her thin skirt showing her legs and more importantly her pussy, which by now was aching. âWhat do you want Mrs?â He was never good with names.
âI came down to see your new home â and bring you some tea. I know you used to enjoy my Royal blend.â Alf was sitting in a small wooden chair only in his boxer shorts â probably he had made it years ago. She figured he came back to his motor home and got undressed and awaited her arrival.
âPut on the sink please.â He pointed to the end of the van past where he was sitting. As she walked past him – he reached under her skirt and placed his hand on her ass. âYou look real nice now.â No subtlety from him. She stopped and let him explore her ass and then his other hand reached up her skirt and he began to finger her pussy. âHow is husband?â
âHeâs fine â had a cancer operation a few years ago.â Alf was sitting in his underwear and Ali reached down and felt his semi hard cock. âIt doesnât work anymore â never hard again.â Alf nodded.
âAh â does husband know.â
âYes he does and itâs okay.â In just a few short questions and answers Alf knew that we had an open relationship and that Ali was free to have sex. He pulled her to his lap as he dug a finger into her pussy. Alf had huge hands â a woodsmanâs hands â scared and knarled from years working in wood and steel. Ali put her arm around his massive hairy shoulders and leaned in to give him a kiss. They kissed and he immediately began to explore her mouth with his tongue. He continued to finger fuck her and she could feel his cock getting hard and pushing against her leg. Alfâs cock was like the rest of his body not overly long but thick. Ali slipped down between his legs and reached into his boxer shorts to find his cock. She was rewarded with a 7 inch cock that was easily 8 inches around the circumference. His cock head was like a fist and try as hard as she could there was no way to get it in her mouth. Ever inventive she spit on it and began licking and stroking it. The Ali picked her up almost by her pussy and ass and laid her on the bed nest to the chair. It was a hand carved dark wooden sledge bed with an old but firm tick mattress. Everything smelled of the woods â wonderful pine, oak and various brushes.
âWe no play anymore.â That was the end of foreplay for Alf – he wanted to get right to it. He laid her on her back and Ali spread her legs wide as her skirt rode up her legs. Alf pulled his boxer shorts down as his cock sprang almost straight out â he was impressive. He slipped between her legs and she reached out for his cock to guide it to her waiting pussy. She was wet and ready. It took a little effort to get his cock head between the lips and into her pussy. Once in he let it slid all the way to the hilt. Ali couldnât help but think that men worried too much about how long their cocks were – when they should be worried about how wide they were. This man was perfectly formed and built for stamina. She could feel the veins in his cock as he thrust in and out. The mattress hardly gave at all. It was better than her very expensive memory foam. He held his thrust and rolled over to have her on top. She pulled her knees up and began to ride his cock âbottoming out with each stroke. As she began to climax Alf said something in Romany. She leaned forward to kiss his black beard and felt her dress being pulled up over her hips. It was Alfâs son Bret who had come in the back door un-noticed.
âWhat a nice ass Mrs Ali.â She turned her head around to see Bret starting to take his boxer short off. As he did a cock just a bit smaller than his fatherâs sprang out from the waistband. He leaned over and kissed her on the ass cheek and started to feel her asshole with his finger and then with his tongue. As she was climaxing she bounced to high and Alfâs cock came out. Bret immediately bent down and licked at her pussy before grabbing his fatherâs cock and putting it back in her pussy. He stepped on to the bed behind Ali and she could hear his spitting and then she felt his spit on her asshole. He rubbed a finger around her hole and then plunged his middle finger in her ass. As he pulled it out he stuck two fingers back in to his last knuckle. Then he pulled his fingers out and placed his cock head at the entrance to her ass and pushed until the head popped in. He then spit again and pushed more cock into her asshole. Ali couldnât believe the feeling of having two thick cocks in her at the same time. She could feel one playing against the other and knew that the two men must have been feeling the same thing. As she bounced on Alfâs cock Bretâs cock was thrusting deep into her ass. She climaxed again and then again. She felt like passing out with the pleasure and then she felt Alf start to cum. My God she thought â this man can cum like no man before. It was running out of her pussy all down his groin. Then Bret began to cum as well and the feeling was extraordinarily blissful being filled with cum in both holes. As Bret pulled out his cum ran down her thighs and onto Alfâs cock.
Bret stepped off the bed and came around to the side and offered up his cock to Aliâs mouth. The smell of his cock was intoxicating and she eagerly slid his cock head in her mouth. It didnât feel like it was going soft and he rammed a few more inches down her throat. As it began to soften he pushed more in her throat. When she had completely licked him clean he withdrew and returned to his fatherâs chair. Alf was starting to soften as well and she slid backwards on to Alfâs legs and placed her lips on his cock head and finally was able to get the head in her mouth. She sucked for a few seconds and then began to lick him clean. It was a heady mix of all three of their juices. âI think we make you a nice table for garden.â This was Alfâs gypsy way of saying thank you â leaving no debt. I am sitting at the table now writing this story. A lovely oak table but a lovelier story.
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The following story is essentially true. The events happened pretty much as described, though I have embellished some of the details. Names have been changed where needed.
Wife and Ex Fiance Unexpected Encounter with the dog
âYou know, we could go to hell for this,â I said as Amanda opened the door to the little chapel.
This is based on a true story from a friend of mine. She was a bit embarrassed and left out most of it so I let my imagination fill in the details.