This is my first story I’ve posted on here, I’m going to tell you about my  first time. Give all the criticism you like, I might think about posting another one but it depends how many of you like it.

So there I was as a 16 year old teen, long brown hair length just reaching the middle of my back, hazel green eyes, double d tits. Most guys wanted me so bad, but because of my big brother they couldn’t even ask me out on a date. I remember the day the new boy came into my science class, he was extremely attractive and seeing I didn’t have a partner I let him join in with me, he was a very muscular boy, 17 years old, he was wearing a pair of blue jeans with a flaming red base ball shirt on, I couldn’t quite read him like I could the other guys. His smile was like shooting stars, he was perfect… well to me anyway.
“hi, I’m Ashlee” I said as I reached out my hand to greet him, ‘hey, I’m Louis’ he replied grasping my hand firmly, “I honestly don’t know anything about chemistry and this crap. So I might need a little help” he admitting said as a smile raged across his face. “well you came to the right girl!” I said jokingly back, he just laughed. We chatted pretty much through the whole lesson until it was over. while we walked to the cafeteria he looked at me and checked me out head to toe, I shyly looked away blushing ” I was just wondering.. Could you um.. Tutor me?” I hesitated to the question because I’ve never tutored anyone before “ah yeah sure, what day are you free?” I hesitantly asked, I think he could tell the question startled me because we only met 40 minutes ago. “tommorrow? After school?” he asked politely with a cocky grin on his face “sure. I’ll give you my address and my number.” I grabbed a pen and wrote down my information and handed it to him”well I’ll see you tomorrow then” he said as he turned away and disappeared in the crowd of gushing teenagers.
I knew my parents were going out for the weekend so I was concerned about them, scolding me for having a boy over. My parents were awfully strict, I remember i kissed a guy for the first time and I go grounded for 2 months. Haha. 
Well Friday came and I just wanted to rush through the day, and get it over and done with. As the last bell wrung for the end of school I literally ran home racing my shadows. As I got home I raced up stairs and three on some black tight leggings and a tight singlet, I didn’t bother wearing shoes, I got all my books out onto the table and separated them out into what I was going to do first. As I got a glass of water I heard someone knock on the door, I walked to the door and it was Louis wearing some jeans and a white pollo shirt, that fitted well into his well built structure I couldn’t help but check him out. Thank god my brother wasn’t home he would have flipped seeing such a handsome guy hug me tightly while stepping through the front door I melted into his arms but quickly snapped out of it as he released my from his tight grip, I told his to follow me into the kitchen as he did. I remember sitting on the bar stools for over an hour or two trying to teach him things I had no clue about. I finally jumped off the stool and went to the fridge, I opened it and offered him a drink “ah yeah what do you have” he said while slipping off the chair and moving towards me, “sorry we don’t have much” I said while laughing. “can I have one?” he asked as he pulled out a beer. “yeah sure” I said walking over to the tap to fill myself a cup of water “oh, you’re not the drinking type?” he asked lifting one of his eye brows. “only on good occasions” I said smiling, “what this isn’t a good occasion?” he said sitting blankly back in the bar stool teasing his drink my way. I decided to tease him a little back “well depends.. Can you make it a good occasion?” I said with a wink , I kind of head slapped myself because I knew I was a virgin who has barely kissed a boy. “oh.” he said sliding from his bar stool once again while taking a step forward, my feet mimicked his movement and I stood back into the marble top bench. He pushed himself into me, and I could feel something gently touching my crotch, as I looked down I saw something bulging under his jeans, I looked at him and smirked, he laughed moving his legs to the sides of mine leaving a gap between his legs, he looked me straight into my eyes answer, he pulled me to him, and planted his mouth on mine. To Louis’s surprise, when he stuck his tongue in my mouth, his cock got even harder. As I broke our amazing kiss off, I took a breath of air in and jumped up onto the table just high enough to wrapped my legs around his waist. He seemed to enjoy that, grabbing both sides of my ass cheeks pulling me up onto his waist he stepped around pushing me into a wall and grinding against my crotch, I moaned I the back of my throat which he seemed to enjoy, grinding me harder with each stroke, I could feel his hard man hood running up and down my throbbing wet pussy. I moaned louder and he smiled, ” my room” I demanded he did as I said strolling up the stairs still grinding against me. We eventually made it into my room and he threw me onto my bed, he took his shirt off and I soon followed by ripping mine off as well, he seemed to lick his lips as my huge tits flew out of my shirt exposing that I had no bra on, he brought his hot warm lips to one of my breasts, I threw my head back and moaned slightly, his tongue prodded against my hard nipple, feeling his hole tongue swirl around made me breath heavily with his strokes. I pulled his head up and I kissed him passionately, our tongues entertained with each others tastes. I moved my hand along his stomach and undid his jeans, he thrusted his hips up do I could slide his cock out of his underwear, my eyes bulged out as I saw how big he was. “oh my, you’re fuckin huge!” I said grabbing around it firmly “not really but thanks” he said grinning.
As I started to move  my thumb gently on his pee hole I heard him moan slightly, I smiled and without Asking I took his whole huge shaft In my mouth I heard him groan and it was like music to my ears, I ran my tongue up and down his huge shaft and brang my lips to the tip just swirling my tongue around on it, he grabbed the back of my head twirling his fingers around my hair he thrusted his hips forward to meet my lips, I’ve never had a gag reflex, so his hot shaft pushed its way down my throat, I repeated what felt like 5 minutes of his hot shaft shoving down in my mouth, “ahhhhh oh Ashlee!!! I’m going to cum! Mmm” that made suck even harder and faster, I sucked and kicked what was only seconds later “OHHHHHHHH IM CUMMING OH FUCK! OH SHIT! ASHLEEEE!!” I got so wet as his cum drenched every inch of my mouth, I was determined to suck him absolutely dry and that’s just what I did, as I finished cleaning all the. In from his now limp cock, I looked up and licked my lips, while a smile ran across my face ” you tasted so good!” I said while making my way up to his lips, he smiled at me ” fuck that was so good!” he said grabbing me around. Y waist and pulling me into him. Suckling on my tits again. I moaned “your turn” he said as he pushed me onto the bed and pulled my leggings off, he noticed my pink lacy knickers and bit his lip. In lust he drew his head right between my legs while pulling my underwear down, he kissed my thighs while throwing my wet undies some where behind him, he eventually brought hip lips to kiss ever so lightly on my clit, i shuddered at the feeling, I thrust my hips forward and he pushed my legs further apart holding a grip against them making sure I couldnt thrust again, he locked. Y mound and stuck his to the deep inside my wet pussy, I moaned in delight as he flicked his tongue all around knowing just were the right spots were, I let my head fall bad onto my bed. And lifted my strokes to meet his, I felt his finger playing with my slit as he stuck his finger deep inside me, I grunted and squealed. And he seemed to love it, I was moaning and he could feel my orgasm coming up, “oh fuck fuck fuck!” i whispered under my breath. He let his finger ran into my pussy deep until it hit my cerfix, i moaned louder and louder as he licked my click and finger fucked my wet thriving pussy “OH LOUIS! OH FUCK! IM CUMMING! OHHHHHHHH’ i screamed and grabbed the back of his hair while my body jerked and thrusted forward, but he didn’t stop he kept lapping up my juices with his tongue, I came multiple times and he eventually stopped, I looked down and I saw his stiffened cock hard as rock.
‘I want you to fuck me so hard!’
I Demanded.

I felt a thrill of combined fear and excitement race through me when He threw himself down onto of me. I!was shaking with anticipation when she felt the head of his cock move between the lips of my wet cunt. It was so much thicker than anything else id ever felt there! But then he stopped.
“I know you’re a virgin so I’ll take it slow”, “no dont go slow! I want you to fuck me like you mean it!!” with that he adjusted himself perfectly positioned as he vastly and swiftly thrusted his hard cock deep inside me, I jerked forward in pain as his hard cock broke
 “do you want me to stop?” he asked hesitantly.
“no no! Keep going!” I replied as he kept thrusting in and out of my pussy, I moaned as I heard him groan, my pain started to turn into instant pleasure , he smiled at me as my hips thrusted rhythmically to his. I started to moan loudly as I heard his balls slapping against my ass. I moaned louder and louder as I felt my climax building up “OHHHHHHHH !!! Cum with me Louis!!!!” he went crazy thrashing around as he felt his balls tighten and my pussy clamp against his hug cock. “OHHHHH F F F UCCCK!!!!” I screamed as I climaxed one of the best climaxes of my life, I felt his hot cum shoot inside me and I hearThis is my first story I’ve posted on here, I’m going to tell you about my  first time. Give all the criticism you like, I might think about posting another one but it depends how many of you like it.

So there I was as a 16 year old teen, long brown hair length just reaching the middle of my back, hazel green eyes, double d tits. Most guys wanted me so bad, but because of my big brother they couldn’t even ask me out on a date. I remember the day the new boy came into my science class, he was extremely attractive and seeing I didn’t have a partner I let him join in with me, he was a very muscular boy, 17 years old, he was wearing a pair of blue jeans with a flaming red base ball shirt on, I couldn’t quite read him like I could the other guys. His smile was like shooting stars, he was perfect… well to me anyway.
“hi, I’m Ashlee” I said as I reached out my hand to greet him, ‘hey, I’m Louis’ he replied grasping my hand firmly, “I honestly don’t know anything about chemistry and this crap. So I might need a little help” he admitting said as a smile raged across his face. “well you came to the right girl!” I said jokingly back, he just laughed. We chatted pretty much through the whole lesson until it was over. while we walked to the cafeteria he looked at me and checked me out head to toe, I shyly looked away blushing ” I was just wondering.. Could you um.. Tutor me?” I hesitated to the question because I’ve never tutored anyone before “ah yeah sure, what day are you free?” I hesitantly asked, I think he could tell the question startled me because we only met 40 minutes ago. “tommorrow? After school?” he asked politely with a cocky grin on his face “sure. I’ll give you my address and my number.” I grabbed a pen and wrote down my information and handed it to him”well I’ll see you tomorrow then” he said as he turned away and disappeared in the crowd of gushing teenagers.
I knew my parents were going out for the weekend so I was concerned about them, scolding me for having a boy over. My parents were awfully strict, I remember i kissed a guy for the first time and I go grounded for 2 months. Haha. 
Well Friday came and I just wanted to rush through the day, and get it over and done with. As the last bell wrung for the end of school I literally ran home racing my shadows. As I got home I raced up stairs and three on some black tight leggings and a tight singlet, I didn’t bother wearing shoes, I got all my books out onto the table and separated them out into what I was going to do first. As I got a glass of water I heard someone knock on the door, I walked to the door and it was Louis wearing some jeans and a white pollo shirt, that fitted well into his well built structure I couldn’t help but check him out. Thank god my brother wasn’t home he would have flipped seeing such a handsome guy hug me tightly while stepping through the front door I melted into his arms but quickly snapped out of it as he released my from his tight grip, I told his to follow me into the kitchen as he did. I remember sitting on the bar stools for over an hour or two trying to teach him things I had no clue about. I finally jumped off the stool and went to the fridge, I opened it and offered him a drink “ah yeah what do you have” he said while slipping off the chair and moving towards me, “sorry we don’t have much” I said while laughing. “can I have one?” he asked as he pulled out a beer. “yeah sure” I said walking over to the tap to fill myself a cup of water “oh, you’re not the drinking type?” he asked lifting one of his eye brows. “only on good occasions” I said smiling, “what this isn’t a good occasion?” he said sitting blankly back in the bar stool teasing his drink my way. I decided to tease him a little back “well depends.. Can you make it a good occasion?” I said with a wink , I kind of head slapped myself because I knew I was a virgin who has barely kissed a boy. “oh.” he said sliding from his bar stool once again while taking a step forward, my feet mimicked his movement and I stood back into the marble top bench. He pushed himself into me, and I could feel something gently touching my crotch, as I looked down I saw something bulging under his jeans, I looked at him and smirked, he laughed moving his legs to the sides of mine leaving a gap between his legs, he looked me straight into my eyes answer, he pulled me to him, and planted his mouth on mine. To Louis’s surprise, when he stuck his tongue in my mouth, his cock got even harder. As I broke our amazing kiss off, I took a breath of air in and jumped up onto the table just high enough to wrapped my legs around his waist. He seemed to enjoy that, grabbing both sides of my ass cheeks pulling me up onto his waist he stepped around pushing me into a wall and grinding against my crotch, I moaned I the back of my throat which he seemed to enjoy, grinding me harder with each stroke, I could feel his hard man hood running up and down my throbbing wet pussy. I moaned louder and he smiled, ” my room” I demanded he did as I said strolling up the stairs still grinding against me. We eventually made it into my room and he threw me onto my bed, he took his shirt off and I soon followed by ripping mine off as well, he seemed to lick his lips as my huge tits flew out of my shirt exposing that I had no bra on, he brought his hot warm lips to one of my breasts, I threw my head back and moaned slightly, his tongue prodded against my hard nipple, feeling his hole tongue swirl around made me breath heavily with his strokes. I pulled his head up and I kissed him passionately, our tongues entertained with each others tastes. I moved my hand along his stomach and undid his jeans, he thrusted his hips up do I could slide his cock out of his underwear, my eyes bulged out as I saw how big he was. “oh my, you’re fuckin huge!” I said grabbing around it firmly “not really but thanks” he said grinning.
As I started to move  my thumb gently on his pee hole I heard him moan slightly, I smiled and without Asking I took his whole huge shaft In my mouth I heard him groan and it was like music to my ears, I ran my tongue up and down his huge shaft and brang my lips to the tip just swirling my tongue around on it, he grabbed the back of my head twirling his fingers around my hair he thrusted his hips forward to meet my lips, I’ve never had a gag reflex, so his hot shaft pushed its way down my throat, I repeated what felt like 5 minutes of his hot shaft shoving down in my mouth, “ahhhhh oh Ashlee!!! I’m going to cum! Mmm” that made suck even harder and faster, I sucked and kicked what was only seconds later “OHHHHHHHH IM CUMMING OH FUCK! OH SHIT! ASHLEEEE!!” I got so wet as his cum drenched every inch of my mouth, I was determined to suck him absolutely dry and that’s just what I did, as I finished cleaning all the. In from his now limp cock, I looked up and licked my lips, while a smile ran across my face ” you tasted so good!” I said while making my way up to his lips, he smiled at me ” fuck that was so good!” he said grabbing me around. Y waist and pulling me into him. Suckling on my tits again. I moaned “your turn” he said as he pushed me onto the bed and pulled my leggings off, he noticed my pink lacy knickers and bit his lip. In lust he drew his head right between my legs while pulling my underwear down, he kissed my thighs while throwing my wet undies some where behind him, he eventually brought hip lips to kiss ever so lightly on my clit, i shuddered at the feeling, I thrust my hips forward and he pushed my legs further apart holding a grip against them making sure I couldnt thrust again, he locked. Y mound and stuck his to the deep inside my wet pussy, I moaned in delight as he flicked his tongue all around knowing just were the right spots were, I let my head fall bad onto my bed. And lifted my strokes to meet his, I felt his finger playing with my slit as he stuck his finger deep inside me, I grunted and squealed. And he seemed to love it, I was moaning and he could feel my orgasm coming up, “oh fuck fuck fuck!” i whispered under my breath. He let his finger ran into my pussy deep until it hit my cerfix, i moaned louder and louder as he licked my click and finger fucked my wet thriving pussy “OH LOUIS! OH FUCK! IM CUMMING! OHHHHHHHH’ i screamed and grabbed the back of his hair while my body jerked and thrusted forward, but he didn’t stop he kept lapping up my juices with his tongue, I came multiple times and he eventually stopped, I looked down and I saw his stiffened cock hard as rock.
‘I want you to fuck me so hard!’
I Demanded.

I felt a thrill of combined fear and excitement race through me when He threw himself down onto of me. I!was shaking with anticipation when she felt the head of his cock move between the lips of my wet cunt. It was so much thicker than anything else id ever felt there! But then he stopped.
“I know you’re a virgin so I’ll take it slow”, “no dont go slow! I want you to fuck me like you mean it!!” with that he adjusted himself perfectly positioned as he vastly and swiftly thrusted his hard cock deep inside me, I jerked forward in pain as his hard cock broke
 “do you want me to stop?” he asked hesitantly.
“no no! Keep going!” I replied as he kept thrusting in and out of my pussy, I moaned as I heard him groan, my pain started to turn into instant pleasure , he smiled at me as my hips thrusted rhythmically to his. I started to moan loudly as I heard his balls slapping against my ass. I moaned louder and louder as I felt my climax building up “OHHHHHHHH !!! Cum with me Louis!!!!” he went crazy thrashing around as he felt his balls tighten and my pussy clamp against his hug cock. “OHHHHH F F F UCCCK!!!!” I screamed as I climaxed one of the best climaxes of my life, I felt his hot cum shoot inside me and I heard him groan. He slumped his body over mine as we Tryed to catch our breath. “this.. Was.. The best.. Tutoring.. Lesson ever” he said still getting his breath back. “you’re right. We should do it more oftend him groan. He slumped his body over mine as we Tryed to catch our breath. “this.. Was.. The best.. Tutoring.. Lesson ever” he said still getting his breath back. ” we should try something different?” he shot up looking at me and suggested anal, I said alright and I got him stuff again, “if it hurts to much I’ll pull out.” he said in a trusting voice. As he rested the tip of his cock against my ass hole, ” put it in me! Fuck my tight ass!” he thrusted forward his dick entering my tight pettite little ass hole I screamed and sobbed as the pain shot up through me ” do you want me to take it out? ” he said Ina hoarse croaky voice ” no, just take it slow ” I replied, wanting to make him saticfied. He Moved his hips back as he pulled out and pushed straight back in as he felt my ass hole loosen he thrusted deeper this time make ing me moans with pleasure. “oh yeah thats right fuck my little ass hole, oh yeah baby!” I seemed to reach under myself and rubb my clot “oh yeah rub your clit baby!” he said thrusting deepe and faster now ” oh fuck me fuck me fuck. Cum in my ass!!” I heard him start groaning and I knew he was close, I started to rub my click harder an faster “oh loui!!! Im cumming oh oh oh fffffffffffuuuuu” insaid as I shuddered feeling the most intense orgasn ever “ohhhhhhhhhhh fuck yes!!!!!!!” he moaned as he filled ass with his warm hot cum.
He slumped on my back out of breath and so was I , his dick slowly went limp and slipped out of my once borgin asshole. “we hav to have more of these tutoring lessons.” he said while cuddling me. I didn’t reply i just cuddled up to him and fell asleep.

If I get enough good feedback, I’ll write another one. But like I said it was my first dodo hopefully you didn’t expect it to be the best thin you’ve ever read. Thanks, Ashlee.

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