A farm Adventure
Ron find a love in his daughter
Nothing is as strong as the bond between father and daughter…
II find a lover in my daughter, who only wants what i can give her
My lonely niece wins my body and heart
A mother and her new best friend start an very passionate affair with her 18 year old son, But the mother starts to want other men.
I didn’t rush Sue out the door after all, so Mom had more time to listen to the action….
Heidi has a problem and it takes the whole family to help her figure it out.
Eating Sundaes early; Tony gets two cherries with his banana
okay received mostly positive responses from the first story, so here is part 2..i aimed to have the actual sex in this one but got a bit sidetracked. Amelia WILL get fucked in the next story:) if you havent already, i would suggest reading part 1..and for those who liked it, i hope this doesnt disappoint (Also, im going on holidays in about a week so ill try get part 3 written before i go) cheers
Robert has learned something called “The Routine” – it is thorougly explained in Chapter I, so you should at least read that one first. Hope you like it, and for those of you who has voted for my previous chapters, thank you very much. Feel free to comment 🙂
Matt is back, and so is his mind control powers and ever lessening sense of restraint.
Awesome Mom
Part 2
Thanksgiving had come and gone and so did mom and I. When our neighbor left our house, Dad watched a movie with us in the living room while mom cleaned up. When she was done she came into the living room and watched the end of the movie. When it was over, my little brother went upstairs to his room and went to bed. My dad followed after the nightly news. I stayed downstairs with my mother for a few minutes. When we heard dad go into the bathroom, I pulled up moms skirt and began to rub her ass. She was facing me and grabbed my head and began to explore my mouth and tongue again. I pulled my right hand from her ass and inserted a finger in her cunt. She was sopping wet already. After a few minutes, she said she had to go upstairs and promised my dad a Thanksgiving fuck. In a way I felt jealous, but I was willing to share. Mom was just happy that he was paying attention to her tonight. Mom reached out, grabbed my cock and said “If I get done early and your awake, maybe I can give you that desert you wanted. She gave me a little peck on the lips and walked upstairs. I shut off all the lights, locked up the house and went upstairs to my bedroom.
After getting dressed for bed, I tip toed over to my parents bed and could here the bed squeaking. It sounded like my dad was trying to pound my mother’s ass into the box spring. Now I was jealous, but excited at the same time and began to jerk off listening to my mom moan and call out in pleasure. I walked back to my room and began to go on the computer. I began to search for porn tubes with mothers and sons. I found a few and finally found a video I liked. I played it and began to think of my mother. I closed my eyes and began to pound away. At this time, my mother was done with my dad and came to my room. My door was closed but unlocked so mom quietly walked in intending to surprise me. I surprised her instead. She was taken back when she saw me jerking off. She walked up behind me and was there for a moment before she said “so you like older women”? I nearly jumped out of my skin. “Mom” I said “I didn’t here you come in”. She was looking at the video streaming on the computer and asked “Is this what your into, or did I just start something new”? I said “You started something new, I used to look and younger girls or porn stars, but now I think I like MILF’s”. I asked where dad was and mom said he fell asleep after her came as usual. When mom startled me I jumped up and was standing with my cock in my hand. Mom sat down at my computer and said she never watched porn on the computer only every now and again with my father during special occasions. She began to click on different sites and was looking at all different things, like blow job video’s hand jobs video’s, anal and so on. She clicked on an older woman seducing a younger girl and leaned back in my chair. Mom was wearing a robe with nothing on underneath. She opened her robe and began to stroke her pussy. I was watching this and reached out for one of her tits while still stroking my cock. As the lesbian video got into full swing, mom would occasionally look at me and then back at the monitor. She really did like girls. Watching mom masturbate to the video was too much for me. I felt that familiar feeling in my balls and my legs began to tense. I told mom I was about to cum and she opened her robe wider, exposing her tits. “Cum on my tits and face baby, let it go”. I did and came all over her like she wanted. With that mom began to cum and was soon dripping all over my leather computer chair and floor.
Mom took her fingers and began to wipe the cum from her face and tits and lick them. “Ummmm, you taste like your dad”. I sat back on my bed while mom went to the bathroom to wash up. She came back, but I was asleep on my bed with my feet hanging off the bed and cock in hand. Mom told me later that she came back for more, but I fell asleep so she put my feet on the bed, covered me and went to down stairs. She told me the next morning that she was up till 3 am masturbating to porn on the computer. She laughed and said “I got you into older women and you got me into computer porn”. I had plans to go out with my friends especially because there was a girl who was my friend’s cousin and I wanted to bang her for the past year. She lived in the next town but was with her cousin at my game and wanted to finally hook up. Dad had gone to work and my brother was on a play date at his friend’s house. My mom was disappointed that I was going and wanted to have some fun, but I wanted this 15 year old piece of ass. Mom was great, but I still liked girls my own age. Mom jokingly said, “I don’t mind, you can bring her over and we could share you”. HHHMMMM that was I thought.
I met up with my friend Roy and his cousin Toni, she was hot. She had medium length brown hair, small tits and a great ass. We were at my friend Roy’s house along with 10 other kids because his parents were away for the weekend. It was noon and I found out that Toni had to leave in an hour, so after 15 minutes we excused ourselves and went to Roy’s bedroom. Long story short, we got naked and I fucked the shit out of this little minx. She wasn’t bad for 15. She sucked my cock and I ate her bald little pussy and then fucked her cunt, but I realized she wasn’t really experienced. We made arraignments to meet soon and she left the party. I left a few minutes later, because all I could think about was my mom home alone. It was 1:30 pm when I got home and was let down to see moms car gone. I went into the house and after about 15 minutes, mom’s car pulled up. She had gone to the gym and then food shopping for milk and a few other supplies we went through during Thanksgiving dinner. Mom was surprised to see me too. She thought I would be at Roy’s all day. I helped her with the groceries and she asked how my little hook up was? I said it was fine, but she wasn’t mom. Mom looked at me and asked if I wore a rubber. I stated no and that Toni was on the pill for a year now. Mom looked at me for a few seconds and said “do you still have her pussy on you or did you wash it off”? I said “I thought you might like that” and pulled out my cock right there in the kitchen. Mom squatted down and smelled my cock and said, “wow she has a nice smelling pussy” and placed my cock in her mouth and began to suck me off like a champ. Mom was wearing Lycra pants and top, had a sports bra underneath and looked so fucking hot. Her ass was just spectacular and you could almost see her camel toe her pants were so tight. Mom began to suck my cock with such energy that the spit from her blow job was dripping all around her hand and face and you could even hear the drops of spit hitting the floor. I didn’t want to cum just yet, so I pushed mom’s head off my cock and made her stand up. I put my thumbs on the inside of her waist band and pulled those Lyrca pants off her ass. Mom began to protest only because she said she needed a shower after her work out. Once again, like a good son, I didn’t listen. I pulled her pants and thong down past her ankles and off her legs, and then made her sit on the kitchen counter. I grabbed the back of her right knee and held it up to her chest as I buried my face in her cunt. Mom was still asking me to stop so she could shower and not smell like sweat, but the musky scent of her pussy and sweat made me crazy and I ate her out with the force of ten men. I inserted two fingers into her cunt trying to find her G spot and licked her clit like crazy. Mom began to tense up and said “Oh my god honey, don’t stop, don’t stop, mommy is going to cum”. With that she grabbed my head and held it just off her pussy about an inch or two. She replaced my tongue with her fingers and rubbed her clit furiously. In seconds she began squirting her pussy juice all over my face and the floor. Just like her spit, I could hear her cum hitting the tile floor under me. I began jerking off and soon was ready to cum too. I told mom I was going to cum and she slid off the counter and sucked my cock dry. We both sat on the kitchen floor, spent.
After a few minutes, I told mom I was going upstairs to clean up. Mom said she would be up soon and wanted to put the groceries away and start dinner. I took a quick shower and entered my room. A few minutes later I heard mom go in her bedroom where she soon took a shower. I lay on my bed naked and dozed off for a few minutes. I woke up when I heard my mom calling out for me to come to her bedroom. I entered her room and found her on her bed with just stockings and high heels. Mom also had her rabbit (vibrator) next to her. I told mom to wait and went to my room for my digital camera. When I returned I told mom I wanted pictures to remember this by and also to jerk off to. She agreed but said they had to either be secured in a password file or on a thumb drive and NO ONE was allowed to see them but us. I agreed and started taking some shots of my mom posing. Mom even said she was getting very turned on by posing for pictures. She picked up her rabbit and began to fuck her cunt with it. All the while I was snapping away. I couldn’t believe my smoking hot mom and I were doing all this crazy shit. Mom flipped over onto her stomach and inserted the rabbit into her ass. I almost died. Mom began to moan as the rabbit disappeared up her ass. Mom fingered herself with one hand while fucking her ass with the other. Soon mom was coming again. I snapped a couple of great shot of her cum squirting out of her cunt. I got on the bed and mom rolled on her back. I positioned myself between her legs and inserted my cock in her cunt. I began to pound away and snap some pictures of her cunt eating my cock. Mom flipped me over and began to ride my cock like she was breaking in a horse. A few times she came off my cock and slammed down right on the head of my cock. She just reached down pulled me straight up and inserted it back in. I was in heaven. I wanted mom’s ass now, so I rolled her off and onto her back. I placed a pillow under her ass and grabbed my cock. I told her I needed her ass now and she reached up, grabbed the back of her knees and pulled them up to her tits, exposing her open ass to me. I placed the head of my cock at her opening and she said to be careful and go slow. I lubed her asshole with her pussy juice and my pre cum. Soon mom was taking my entire shaft. I rammed her for all I was worth while mom screamed out in pleasure, “fuck my ass baby, that’s it fuck my ass hard. I want you to cum in my ass honey”. Mom was now holding both legs against her tits with one arm while her other hand was rubbing her clit. I couldn’t take it any longer and exploded into mom’s ass. As I did, mom came too and squirted all over my lower abdomen. I held my cock in her ass until it got softer then pulled out. Mom grabbed the towel from her shower and placed it under her ass. She lifted one leg and we both watched as my cum dripped out of her ass and her little asshole ring began to twitch and contract. It was nasty and hot at the same time.
We cleaned up and my dad and brother soon came home. Mom and I continued to fuck all through High school. Mom wanted to do real weird shit like have me fuck her from behind in front of her bedroom window as we watched my dad snow plowing our driveway or by the bathroom window while he was just outside by the pool and so on. Toni and I became an item while I was in High Scholl and I would teach her everything mom did to me and soon enough she was one of the best fucks I ever had. She was a grade behind me and after I went to college I only saw her a few times in four years. When I went to college mom and I all but stopped our sessions. I was too busy and never stayed home much even when I did come home. I was 6’3” and 255 lbs in college and was playing football for my dad and moms college. Good genes and some rounds of steroids kept me in prime shape and I was being scouted by a few NFL teams. But my knee gave out with a career ending injury my senior year. During one of the school breaks I was home and mom and I had one last round for old time’s sake. I told her I still jerk off to the hundreds of pictures I took of her over the years. While she was jerking me off she said do you remember Toni the little girl you used to follow you around and come over all the time. I said “yes, of course, she was a great little lay”. Mom said well I seduced her just after you left for college and fucked her for a year while you were gone. Mom leaned in next to my ear gave me a little lick and told be the whole story. It was one of our best and last fuck sessions we had, but her and Toni will be another story.
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Chapter 4
Over the next few weeks, Sue and Tommy continued
their liaisons. There was no longer any hesitation on
Sue’s part. Somehow, she had rationalized that since
they were not actually having “sex” it was okay.
However, she knew in her heart that there was no
difference.
Sue continued to teach Tommy what a woman liked
and what a woman needed. It was part of her
rationalization. She could make him a better lover
for his wife someday. She showed him how to
caress and suck her breasts. She pointed out her
sensitive spots, all the places that most men miss.
Little places like behind the knee or the crook of
her arm. She taught him that sometimes women like
it a little rough but most of the time they wanted
a tender and considerate lover.
While some of it was confusing to Tommy, he was
a very willing pupil. He was anxious to learn
everything there was to know about what turned his
mom on. He would refuse her nothing as he was
now desperately in love with her.
Sue wasn’t blind and could see the love in his
eyes. It was also obvious that he wanted to go all
the way with her. In her mind, that was still out
of bounds. However, she knew that she was only
deluding herself and that they were far beyond the
boundaries with their relationship.
A few weeks after they began their oral exploration,
Sue and Tommy had one of their evening dates.
They decided to stay home and relax. Sue had had
a very difficult week at work when several important
people resigned. She had been upset and tense all
week, deferring any sexual activity until the end of
the week
Tommy had been understanding and patient but he
was mad with desire by the time the week ended.
He had a plan tonight. This was the night, he
thought. He couldn’t wait any longer.
Tommy got things ready while Sue took a bath. He
had set up a game of Scrabble on the floor and
put a bottle of Sue’s favorite wine on ice. He was
sitting on the floor when Sue came down. He saw
that she had decided not to get dressed, preferring
to wear a long soft terry cloth robe to cover her
otherwise naked body. Her hair was still damp from
the shower as she walked into the room.
As Tommy looked at his mother, his heart skipped
a beat. It was as if he were seeing her for the
first time. For some reason, she looked incredibly
beautiful tonight with no make up or sexy clothes
on and her hair still wet from the shower.
Sue was still tired and tense but she was looking
forward to their quiet evening.
It was a very dangerous environment for a woman
that had refused to consummate her incestuous
relationship with her son.
She and Tommy played several games of Scrabble as
they talked and laughed. Sue felt the tension
draining from her. No matter how tough it got
outside, she always had Tommy to give her comfort.
As she sat on the floor, she watched her son. He
was growing up quickly. Soon he would be a man
with children of his own. Sue sighed and pictured
Tommy as a father, playing with his kids. She was
certain that he would be a good father and
husband. Her heart swelled with pride and love.
“Uh… Mom, it’s your turn,” Tommy said.
“Oh… I’m sorry. I was a million miles away. I
think I’ve had enough for tonight.”
“Okay. What about a shoulder massage?”
“That would be wonderful.”
Tommy moved the Scrabble board out of the way
and got on his knees behind his mother. He placed
his strong hands on her shoulder muscles and
started to squeeze. “Wow, you are tense.”
“Mmmmm. I know. That feels so good sweetie,”
Sue said relaxing into his strong hands.
“Let me get to the skin,” Tommy said, pushing
the soft robe down until her shoulders were bare.
Even her shoulders are sexy, Tommy thought as his
hands went to work on her again.
“Oh Tommy that’s wonderful.”
Soon Sue felt so relaxed that she felt like she
could almost go to sleep. As she swayed slightly
back and forth, she felt Tommy’s hands move
across her shoulders and down toward her chest.
She smiled as she felt him gradually move his
fingers to the upper swells of her breasts. She
leaned back into him and let him have her breasts.
Tommy wasted no time in capturing both breasts in
his hands. He looked over her shoulder and watched
as he massaged her chest as he had done her
shoulders. However, there were no tense muscles
there, only warm and pliant flesh.
Sue moaned as he squeezed and massaged her
breasts with his experienced fingers. She felt him
take the nipples between his fingers and squeeze
firmly. Then he pulled them up, lifting her heavy
orbs. A little whimper escaped her lips and she
moved her chest upward, following his fingers. Sue’s
nipples were always very sensitive and had a direct
line to her groin. She squeezed her legs together
as little shock waves rushed down her body.
After a few minutes, Tommy got up and turned off
all but one soft light. Then he brought some pillows
down from the sofa. He put his arm around his
mom and pulled her down to lay with him. Her
still uncovered breasts pressed to his chest as he
pulled her close. At the perfect time, Tommy turned
to his mom and brought his lips to hers. It was
the first of many passionate kisses.
The body heat of the two began to climb rapidly
as their kisses grew in intensity. It seemed so
natural when Tommy opened the belt on her robe
and pushed it down to reveal the soft curves of
her body. Tommy stared in wonder. It seemed that
each time he saw her naked, she looked more
beautiful.
Tommy began to pull all of his mother’s sexual
strings. She had taught him well, leaving her no
defenses. He kissed her lips softly, moving up her
neck and bringing chills to her warm body. Then
his tongue touched her ear, circling it and leaving
a wet trail behind.
“I love you Mom,” Tommy whispered then began
to kiss back down her neck. Moving slowly down,
his tongue following the contours of her body until
he reached the swells of her breasts. He placed
gentle kisses across the smooth surface until he
reached the nipple and then sucked one and then
the other into his mouth. He used his fingers to
tweak one nipple as his tongue licked the other.
Sue was a moaning mass of quivering flesh by the
time Tommy got to the soft skin of her belly.
Tommy knelt between her legs and lifted them onto
his shoulders. He slowly bent to her center, kissing
her soft and quivering thighs as he went. He
teased her, denying her his mouth to the place she
wanted it most. Up and down her legs he moved,
even taking her toes into his mouth and sucking
them. He knew that he was teasing his mother to
the brink of her endurance.
Finally, he spread her legs as wide as possible and
paused, looking down at her pulsing sex. He could
tell that she had just shaved herself. Her pubic
mound was smooth and soft. Tommy’s mouth
practically drooled. With a little whine, he bent his
head to her center.
“Oh Jesus Tommy, oh God, oh God,” Sue moaned
as she felt his tongue move up and down the
smooth outer lips. He even pushed his tongue into
the crease on each side, licking the sensitive flesh.
His tongue worked around her swollen lips, barely
touching them.
Tommy pulled back and smiled at his mother. He
saw her eyes hooded over in denied pleasure. He
reached down and gently opened her lips, exposing
the now throbbing clit. He lowered his head and
blew warm air on the little nub, watching it quiver
with need.
“Oh God Tommy, please,” Sue begged.
Tommy didn’t answer. Instead, he pushed her legs
up to her chest, exposing her entire groin to him.
He could see her tiny rear hole almost winking at
him. His mom had never taught him anything about
that place. Suddenly, he felt the need to kiss it.
His head bent quickly, before she could stop him
and kissed the little hole, feeling it pulse under his
lips.
“Oh my God Tommy,” Sue almost screamed as she
felt his tongue on her back passage, tickling her.
“Tommy, Tommy, what are you doing?” she gasped.
If Tommy even heard her, he paid no attention.
His tongue licked around the hole, teasing the
sensitive skin and felt it quiver. Then suddenly, he
pushed it inside.
“Tommmmmmmmmmy!!!!” Sue’s hips bucked up
into Tommy’s mouth as his tongue stretched her
back passage. She had never felt anything like it. It
was so nasty but oh so exciting. “Oh God, oh
God, oh God.”
Tommy was proud of himself. He had found
something his mother hadn’t taught him. His penis
throbbed almost painfully in his shorts as he moved
his tongue in and out of her rear hole. His saliva
drooled down and around his mother’s stretched
hole. Tommy found that he loved the feel of her
little hole and promised to come back there at a
later time. However, right now he had other plans.
When Tommy had his mother totally mad with
passion and desperate for him to do something to
her, he bent over her and whispered. “Mom, can
I just touch your pussy with my cock?”
“Oh Tommy, I… I… oh God, please, oh I
don’t know. I can’t think,” she responded, almost
incoherent.
Tommy took that as a yes and quickly stripped his
clothes off. He stood for a moment over his
mother, letting her see his excitement. His penis
was dripping juice and the shaft was bouncing up
and down with his rapid heartbeat. He wrapped his
hand around it and slowly moved his fist across the
length of it. His other hand cupped his balls,
almost offering them to her.
“Oh Tommy!” his mother moaned as she watched
his wanton display.
Tommy moved to kneel between his mother’s legs
before she could protest. Leaning forward on one
hand, he used the other to push the swollen head
of his penis down to touch his mother’s dripping
sex lips. Next, he gently mixed his own leaking
juice with his mother’s, moving the head in a
circular motion. Then he moved it up and down
between the lips, teasing both his sensitive head
and her swollen lips. When he felt the head touch
her swollen clit, he paused, circling the soft skin of
his penis head on her center of pleasure.
“Ahhhhhh!!!” Sue moaned.
Then Tommy slowly slid his penis down and almost
imperceptibly inserted the head between her lips.
“Oh Tommy, no,” Sue said, placing her hands on
his hips to prevent him from moving further in.
She was gasping for breath, her arms shaking from
excitement as she tried weakly to hold him back
with the last vestiges of control.
Neither his mother’s tone of voice nor her hands
seemed to be forceful enough to invoke the “stop”
rule. Tommy reasoned that she had not actually
used the word “stop,” so he continued moving
forward, ever so slowly. He looked down to the
point where their bodies met and saw that the
head was now completely inside his mother’s body.
Her beautiful smooth lips were stretched around his
shaft. He felt the head expand and throb inside of
her. In reaction, his mom’s hole quivered and
squeezed him tight.
Sue was moaning and moving her head back and
forth slowly, as if to say “no”, but no words
came from her mouth. Her hands, which had been
holding him back, seemed to be easing the pressure
on his hips.
Tommy took a risk and pushed slightly forward,
inserting another inch into her. Suddenly, Tommy felt
like he was going to cum and spoil everything. He
needed to concentrate on something else, as his
mother had taught him, until the desire to climax
lessened. He used his hand to squeeze hard at the
base of his penis and then he held very still for a
while, thinking about football, baseball, anything but
sex. When the threat passed, he pushed a little
harder, forcing another inch into his mother. He
could feel the warm confines of his mother’s vagina
caressing and massaging him like a soft, wet glove.
Sue opened her eyes and looked into Tommy’s.
There was an electrical charge running between
them, starting at their joined parts and moving up
their bodies.
In his mother’s burning eyes, he could see an
incredible look of love. In that instant he knew how
love and sex fit together.
It was impossible for Sue to hold her eyes open
for long as ripples of pleasure rushed through her.
“No, no, no, no,” she whispered but made no
move to stop her son.
Tommy removed his hand from the base of his
penis and placed it on the other side of his almost
delirious mother. He was now supporting himself on
his hands and toes; the only connection between the
two was their sexual parts. His penis was now
several inches inside her. Nothing they had done
had ever prepared him for the feeling of her soft
insides. It was tight, warm and wet. He could feel
his mother’s insides quivering; the soft folds of skin
rippling up and down his shaft.
When Tommy didn’t move to enter her further, Sue
opened her eyes. She saw Tommy still staring back
down at her. The only sounds in the room were
from the clock on the wall and their pounding
hearts. Sue knew that this was the moment. There
would be no going back; if she didn’t stop him
now, she could never deny him again. They would
become real lovers–mother and son.
Sue’s vagina gave an involuntary squeeze around her
son’s penis. She tried to control the desire to
thrust her hips up at him. Still, her hips began to
make little movements, almost quivering.
Tommy waited. He wanted his mom to accept him
into her body. He never wanted her to look back
and think that he had forced himself on her. The
moments ticked by, mother and son, eye to eye,
their bodies connected at one strategic point.
“Oh Tommy, please,” Sue begged in a whisper,
her eyes almost rolling back in her head.
“Please what?” Tommy asked, wanting to hear her
say it.
“Please, please,” Sue begged again, her mind in
an emotional turmoil. She knew what he wanted but
she didn’t want to say it. It was wrong, so
wrong.
Tommy took another risk and pulled his penis
partially out, like he was going to remove it
completely. Sue immediately grabbed his hips and
held him still, his penis only just inside her body.
“What do you want Mom?” Tommy asked, again
forcing her to make a decision.
“I… I… oh God Tommy! I want… oh Jesus…
I want you to FUCK ME!” she finally said.
“Are you sure?” Tommy asked, knowing that he
couldn’t stop now even if she said no.
“Oh yes! Please FUCK ME!”
Tommy smiled, he had won this emotional battle,
and now he could claim the prize. He slowly forced
his weight down, pushing himself inch by inch into
his mother’s body. He heard her moan as he slid
deep into her until his balls touched the soft skin
of her buttocks. His body pressed down on her,
feeling her burning body against his.
Sue’s hips began to buck up in spasm as her arms
went around her son’s neck. Her mouth went to
his shoulder and she bit down, cutting off a scream
of pleasure. It had been so long since she had felt
a man inside her. However, this wasn’t just any
man. This was her son. She was fucking her own
son! her mind screamed.
Tommy was fighting for control and again had to
call on all his strength to hold back his climax. He
had never felt anything so wonderful. His mother’s
warm hole caressed the length of him like a velvet
glove.
He held himself deep as he looked at her beautiful
face. Then he brought his lips to hers in an
emotional kiss. His tongue went deep into her
mouth as his shaft had gone deep into her
welcoming hole. He could feel her soft breasts
pressing into his chest, heaving with her labored
breathing. Their bodies were connected from top to
bottom.
He pulled his lips from hers and said, “I am
going to fuck you now, Mom. I have my cock
deep in your beautiful body. I am going to fuck
you until you cum over and over. I want to feel
that tight pussy squeezing my cock like a vise,
squeezing all the cum out of me. Are you ready,
are you ready for me to fuck you?”
“Yes, yes, yes, fuck me, fuck me hard. I need
it! I need your cock deep in me! Fuck me!
Make me cum all over that wonderful cock of
yours!” All of Sue’s control was gone. She was
lost in sexual delirium.
That’s what Tommy was waiting to hear. He pulled
back slowly, hesitating for just a second, and then
he rapidly plunged into her.
Sue screamed; she felt like her mind had lost all
control of her body. She was rapidly spiraling into
a climax. She was fucking her son; they were now
real lovers. The wet slapping sounds echoed in the
quiet room.
From somewhere, Tommy found new staying power
and used it to drive his mother crazy with desire.
He was like a machine, his hips moving up and
down in a blur. Time and again, he plunged deep
into her, spattering her juice over his balls and
thighs. His balls were now making a loud slapping
sound as they hit the cheeks of her buttocks.
Sue looked up at her son just before she lost all
control and said, “Oh God, I love you.” Then
she closed her eyes and her body trembled.
Suddenly, fire works started to go off in her head.
She barely heard Tommy’s words of love as a
climax roared through her, sending her into
convulsions of pleasure.
“I love you,” Tommy responded with his last
breath before he reached his peak and began to
release everything he had into his mother. Squirt
after squirt poured from him and into her, filling
the tight hole to overflow. He could feel his
mother’s body tense as wave after wave of ecstasy
took her to a place she had never been before.
Her legs locked around his back holding him a
prisoner deep within her body. His life giving sperm
continued to surge into the depths of her womb.
Finally, Tommy collapsed onto his mother and then
rolled to the side, his shrunken penis slipping out,
trailing sperm across her thigh. He pulled his now
limp mother over to him. When he kissed her
cheek and she didn’t respond, he realized that she
had lost consciousness.
Some time later, Sue stirred. “Oh God,” she
sighed.
Tommy heard her words and worried that she was
sorry about what had happened.
Sue pulled away and got to her feet. She stood
above her lover and her son, looking down with
undisguised love.
Tommy looked back, reading her thoughts. He could
see that she was not upset.
How could this be so wrong? she thought.
Tommy eyes traveled down his mother’s gorgeous
body. They stopped when he saw something in the
soft room light that caused his penis to stir anew.
His sperm had begun to drip out of her saturated
hole and run down her thigh.
Sue did nothing to stop it, she loved the feeling;
it was the evidence of their love pouring from her
satisfied body. Sue smiled down at Tommy then held
out her hand. She led him upstairs to her bed.
By the time they got to the bedroom, Tommy was
hard again. Sue lay back on the bed and opened
her arms and legs to her son. Effortlessly his penis
slid into her saturated hole and his hips began to
move again.
The rest of the night was a blur of sexual frenzy.
Tommy’s youth wore his mother out. He took her
three more times that night, bringing her to the
brink of exhaustion and ultimate satisfaction.
When Tommy awoke the following morning, the bed
beside him was empty. He looked at the clock and
saw that it was ten AM. He crawled out of bed
and found a pair of shorts to put on and then
went downstairs. As he walked into the kitchen, he
saw his mother standing at the stove fixing breakfast
with a spatula in her hand and looking out the
window. The light from the window silhouetted her
body under the thin housedress. Tommy stood and
admired his mother’s form, feeling excitement begin
to grow.
Sue’s mind was awash in turmoil again. There was
no doubt that she loved her son like a man. In
truth, she had no regrets about what had
happened. However, she knew that it was going to
be difficult for them. The future was very uncertain.
Where would they go from here? How would they
keep their relationship secret? What if somebody found
out? It was all so complicated.
Tommy walked up behind his mother and wrapped
his arms around her, kissing her neck and squeezing
her tight.
Sue reached up and touched Tommy’s arms lovingly
then bent and kissed the back of his hand. A
wave of love overcame her as tears began to fall.
Tommy heard his mother sniffle and turned her
around. “What’s wrong, Mom?”
“Nothing,” she said, smiling through her tears. “I
love you.”
Their lips came together in a tender kiss. Slowly as
their tongues dueled, the passion grew. When
Tommy pulled back, there was a fire in his eyes
again. He stared into his mother’s eyes and brought
his hands to her housedress. Suddenly, with a
mighty tug, Tommy ripped the front of the dress
down the middle, shooting buttons all over the
kitchen.
Sue screamed in surprise.
Tommy pushed the ruined dress off his mother’s
shoulders and let it drop to the floor. Then he
pulled her over to the kitchen table and pushed her
back until she was sitting on it. He pulled up a
chair and sat between her legs.
“Oh God Tommy, what are you doing?” Sue gasped
but didn’t fight him when he pushed her to her
back.
“Having breakfast,” Tommy answered as his mouth
covered her vagina. He ate her like a madman. His
lips and tongue were everywhere he could reach. He
ignored his mother’s cries of pleasure as she
climaxed over and over. Finally, when his jaw tired,
he pushed her legs into the air and entered her.
“Ahhhhhh!!!” she screamed as his long shaft
went to the bottom of her still saturated hole in
one thrust.
As he pounded into his mother, the table squeaked
and moved across the floor, threatening to collapse.
After having so many climaxes last night, Tommy
knew that he could go on for a long time. Which
he did, bringing her to climax after climax.
Just when Sue thought he was done and would
climax, he picked her up and held her to his groin
like a doll. She held on tight to his neck as he
walked her around the room, continuously moving in
and out of her. He took her on the sink, the
counter, against the refrigerator and eventually on
the floor. They knocked over chairs and rattled china
in the cabinets.
Sue was almost relieved when he said he was going
to cum. Her poor body could barely take any
more. When he cried out that he was going to
cum, she pulled him tight to her, her legs
wrapping around his waist and let him climax into
her body once more.
Sue couldn’t deny it any longer. She was in love
with her own son. There was no going back so
she decided that the future would take care of
itself. Through all of the uncertainty there was one
thing for sure, their love. It would see them
through.
The sexual relationship between Sue and Tommy
continued and even accelerated over the next several
months. Tommy was almost insatiable. It was as if
he were trying to make up for the high school
years. The two of them had had sex almost
everywhere possible, and in every position. However,
there was one thing that they hadn’t done, but
Tommy was afraid to ask.
On Tommy’s nineteenth birthday, Sue wanted to do
something special for him. She prepared his favorite
meal and had them both dress for dinner. Tommy
complained about having to put on a suit but as
usual did what his mother asked.
When dinner was over and the dishes left on the
table, Sue and Tommy went into the living room.
Sue put on some slow music and took Tommy into
her arms.
As they danced, Tommy caressed his mother’s
buttocks through her satin dress. Tommy loved the
way she looked in this dress. It emphasized her ass
to perfection. It was skin tight and short, with a
split all the way up to her hip. He knew that she
wasn’t wearing panties because they would be
visible. Besides, she rarely wore underwear anymore.
It only got in the way of their frequent bouts of
sex.
Sue kissed her son’s neck and let him caress her
buttocks. Then she whispered into his ear, “You
like my ass don’t you?”
“God yes,” he responded, squeezing her firm but
soft cheeks for emphasis.
“Do you want it?”
Tommy pulled back from his mother with a
questioning look on his face. “What?” He could see
that his mother’s eyes were burning with lust.
“I’m a virgin back there.”
It took Tommy a second to realize what she was
saying. “You mean… you mean fuck you there?”
he asked incredulously.
“Yes! I want to give my ass to you. It’s my
special present for your birthday. Of course if you
don’t want to…”
“No… I mean yes… oh God Mom, are you
serious?”
Sue kissed Tommy’s lips then took his hand. She
led him up the stairs and into their bedroom. She
let Tommy sit on the bed then turned around for
him to unzip her dress.
Tommy’s hands were shaking as he slowly lowered
the zipper. He could see his mother’s smooth back
as the dress opened. The zipper went all the way
to the top of her buttocks.
Sue shrugged the dress off, letting it fall to her
feet, leaving her naked but for a pair of high
heels and silk thigh high nylons. She stood with her
back to him, letting him see her naked form. Then
she looked over her shoulder and smiled, saying,
“Do you want to fuck me in the ass?” She leaned
slightly forward and reached back, spreading her
cheeks.
“Oh God,” was all Tommy could say as he saw
his mother spread her buttocks obscenely in front of
him.
“Get your clothes off,” she said and turned around
to help him strip. Soon, they were lying on the
bed naked and in an embrace.
Sue turned over on her back and grabbed a couple
of pillows, putting them under her buttocks. When
she was situated on her back with her thighs
spread, she motioned to Tommy to get between her
legs.
Tommy hurried to comply. When he was kneeling
between her raised thighs she looked into his eyes
and said, “Put your cock in my pussy first and
get it wet. Then fuck my ass.”
Tommy almost climaxed right then. With shaking
hands, he fitted his penis between his mother’s wet
lips. A moan escaped both of them as he pushed
into her. Her tight hole felt so good that he
couldn’t imagine anything better.
After Tommy had thrust into her a few times, Sue
pushed him back. Then she placed her legs on his
shoulders and lifted up until her rear hole was
exposed. Her hands were trembling as she reached
down and pulled her cheeks apart. “Put it in,”
she hissed excitedly.
Tommy’s aimed the large head of his penis at her
tiny brown hole. He couldn’t imagine how it could
fit into such a small place. Slowly he pushed
forward. He heard his mother groan and he stopped
to look at her face.
Her eyes were closed tight but she said, “Go
ahead.”
With his hands on her thighs, Tommy pulled her
toward him and pushed at the same time.
“Ahhhh!” he groaned as the head of his penis
slipped inside his mother’s tight little hole. The ring
snapped shut, squeezing the head in a vise.
“Wait, wait,” Sue breathed, letting her rear
passage get used to the large head. After a few
excruciating seconds for Tommy, she said, “Okay,
fuck me.”
Tommy pushed again and watched in amazement as
his rod disappeared into his mother’s body. Inch by
inch it moved until his entire penis was surrounded
by her warm insides. The feeling was incredible. It
was soft, hot and tight like her vagina but
different. It squeezed every inch of his shaft, from
the base to the tip.
“Fuck meeeee!” Sue pleaded.
Almost reluctantly, Tommy began to move, pulling his
penis almost all the way out before pushing back
in. “Oh God,” he moaned as her smooth hole
sucked him inside. Tommy began to move faster.
“That’s it, that’s it, fuck me lover. Fuck your
mother’s asssssss!” Sue screamed as she built
toward a climax. She reached down and began to
rub her clit. “Oh God baby, I’m going to cum.
Oh yes, oh yes,” she hissed as her hole tightened
around Tommy’s shaft.
“Oh Jesus Mom,” Tommy moaned as he felt her
body began to convulse. “I’m going to cum too,”
he moaned. He pushed into her hole as deeply as
possible and froze.
Sue felt his penis quiver inside her ass. She was
amazed that she could actually feel him begin to
cum. That intensified her building climax.
Both of them screamed in pleasure as Tommy filled
his mother’s rear hole with his seed.
Two years later…
The next two years were the happiest time in Sue’s
life. Her job was great, her lover and son was
even better. They were truly friends and lovers.
Their relationship had progressed to the point where
Tommy had moved into his mother’s bedroom but
kept clothes in a spare room for show. They slept
every night together and their sexual relationship had
become even more intense. It was hard to tell
whose desire was greatest. Tommy was still insatiable
but Sue kept up with him.
Tommy was doing well in school and had decided to
major in engineering. He was a taller, stronger,
and even more handsome young man now. His
experiences with his mom had made him much more
mature then other boys his age.
There was only one problem with their happy life
and Sue wanted to correct that. However, she
wasn’t sure how to approach it. She had been
thinking about it for months and had finally gotten
up enough nerve to bring it out in the open.
Tommy sensed that it was going to be a special
night tonight. He and his mom were going to a
show and then back home for dinner. That wasn’t
unusual. However, he could see a light in his
mother’s eyes and that always meant something
special was going to happen.
As usual, Tommy was waiting downstairs for his
mom. When she came down, she was wearing a
tight black evening dress that was short on her
thighs and very low cut. She had a string of
pearls around her neck that Tommy had given her
last week for her 39th birthday.
“Sorry I’m late sweetie,” she smiled as she
passed.
Tommy grabbed her arm and turned her back to
him. He leaned to her ear, as if someone could
hear, and whispered, “Mom, would you take your
panties off for me?”
She looked at him in surprise but quickly reached
up under her dress and stripped her panties down
her legs and over her high heels. Smiling at her
son, she handed them to him. She watched in
amusement as he folded the panties and placed
them in his vest pocket, and then fluffed them up.
“Thanks Mom, now my outfit is complete.” Tommy
smiled devilishly.
“You never cease to amaze me lover,” Sue said,
kissing his cheek.
The play was entertaining and went by fast.
However, Tommy noticed that his mother seemed
anxious about something. She was fidgeting in her
seat. He thought it might be excitement about the
night ahead. After all, she had put off sex with
him for a week, saying that it was her “time of
the month.” Tommy didn’t understand that because
he thought she had just had her period a few
weeks ago. However, he shrugged it off. What do
guys know about that stuff, he thought.
Sue had prepared everything in advance. The dining
room table was set, with candles on the table,
wine chilled, and the food ready to be heated and
served. They remained dressed for the dinner.
“Mom, dinner was perfect. Thank you,” Tommy
said sincerely, lifting his glass of wine for a toast.
Sue brought her glass to his. “You’re welcome
Tommy,” Sue said, looking nervous, like she had
something to say.
“What’s wrong Mom?” Tommy asked concerned.
“Tommy, I have something to ask you. I am not
sure how to say this.” Sue hesitated for a minute
then continued. “You know that I’ve always wanted
more children.”
“I know Mom. I feel bad about that.”
“I’m 39 and my biological clock is ticking away.
We’ve made a commitment to each other so there
isn’t likely to be another man in my life or a
woman in yours. I had hoped that I would
eventually meet someone and marry again so that I
could have the children that I always wanted. The
problem is, I fell in love with my own son and I
don’t want anyone else.”
“I know how you feel.” The thought had crossed
Tommy’s mind as well. However, he was looking at
it more from his perspective because he wanted
children as well but he couldn’t imagine anyone else
in his life either. They were stuck in a paradox
and there seemed to be no solution.
“I know that I’m not saying this right so let me
give you this and then maybe you will understand,”
Sue said, handing him a wrapped package.
Tommy took the package with a look of confusion
on his face. The package was small, about the size
of a music CD. With trembling hands, Tommy
opened it up, having no idea what to expect.
When he had opened the package, he held the
contents in his hand curiously. He had a totally
dumbfounded expression on his face. He looked up
at his mother and shrugged his shoulders in
confusion.
Sue didn’t say a word. She just waited.
Tommy looked at what he held in his hand. It was
a circular package of pills. There were 30 spaces
for pills, indicating that one should be taken each
day. However, all were gone except the last seven
pills. Suddenly, Tommy looked at his mom with a
startled expression on his face. “Uh… what…
you…” Tommy stuttered, his mouth hanging open.
Sue reached across the table and took his hand.
“Yes Tommy, they are my birth control pills and
yes, I haven’t taken them for the past seven days.
That’s why I’ve haven’t let you have me all
week.”
“But, I, I don’t understand. You can’t be thinking
that we…”
“Let me try to explain,” Sue interrupted. “I’ve
done a lot of research over the past six months
and have found that the rate of problems for
children born of an incestuous relationship is really
very small,” she said pausing to let Tommy absorb
what she was saying.
“My God Mom, are you serious?” Tommy asked.
He couldn’t believe what his mother was asking
him.
“Yes.”
“Oh my God… you… you want a baby and you
want me to be the father?”
“Yes Tommy, I want you to make me pregnant. I
want to have your child,” Sue said and paused for
a long moment. “Tommy, before you answer, you
have to know that this is a difficult thing for us.
There are all kinds of potential problems. Even
though we don’t have family who live nearby, that
is still a concern. In addition, there is my job and
your college. There are all kinds of questions that I
don’t have answers for. However, I’m willing to
take the risks. But, it’s up to you. If you don’t
want this, you can just hand the pills back to me.
If you want me to have your child, throw the pills
in the trash can.”
Tommy practically leaped from his chair and tossed
the pills in the trashcan. He hurried back to the
table and pulled his mother to her feet. She now
had tears streaming down her cheeks. Mother and
son kissed tenderly, holding each other tight.
Suddenly, Tommy pulled away from his mom and
went down to one knee.
“Mom, I know this is silly and that we can never
really be married but my love and commitment to
you is as strong as any marriage has ever been. I
would love to father your child,” Tommy said,
tears streaming down his cheeks.
Sue pulled her son to his feet and looked into his
eyes. “Oh God Tommy, are you sure you know
what you’re saying?”
“Mom, I love you more than I thought I could
ever love anyone. You are everything to me and I
would do anything for you. I want this. I want
you to have my baby.”
Mother and son brought their lips together in the
sweetest kiss they had ever had.
Tommy picked his mother up in his arms and
silently carried her to their bed. He laid her down
and quickly stripped and then he crawled onto the
bed next to her. Kissing her lips, he slowly slipped
the straps of her dress down her arms until her
breasts were bare. He worked his lips down her
neck to her heaving chest. He sucked one nipple
and then the other into his mouth, bringing a
moan from his mother. Then he turned until his
head was between her legs and his penis was close
to her mouth. He heard his mother moan as she
took him in her mouth. His lips covered her hole
and he began to suck. They worked each other to
a fervor before stopping to strip Sue’s clothes off.
Tommy pushed his mother back on the bed, took a
pillow, and placed it under her hips. He knew that
this would get the deepest penetration. He knelt
between her legs, his hard penis pulsing above his
mom’s waiting hole. Their eyes locked together.
“Tell me Mom, tell me what you want,” Tommy
said holding his swollen head near her equally
excited hole.
“Please Tommy, fuck your mother. I want that big
cock deep in my fertile pussy. I want you to give
your mother a baby! Fuck me, please,” Sue
whined as she reached down and spread her juicy
lips. “Look at how ready I am for you. Can you
see the juice running out of me? I want your potent
sperm running out of my pussy all night.”
“Oh God Mom,” Tommy moaned, excited by her
nasty words.
Tommy brought his penis to her wet and open
hole. Slowly he placed the head into the entrance.
Both mother and son moaned as he slid deeply into
her. The sensation felt so much greater because of
what they were going to do; he was going to
make his own mother pregnant. It was the greatest
taboo of all.
Sue felt Tommy begin to move in and out of her
in a slow, steady motion, taking his time, building
the heat and excitement. She wrapped her legs
around her son and pushed into him. When he
touched bottom it brought another moan from both
of them.
“Fuck me, fuck me hard. I need it so bad,
please fuck me,” Sue gasped.
Tommy began to pound into his mother like never
before. Sweat began to drip off of him as he
worked his penis rapidly in and out of her. He
could feel his her juice splashing all over his balls,
dripping down to the sheets. The pounding went on
and on. Neither one of them could get enough of
the other.
“I’m getting close Mom. Can I cum in you?”
“Yes, yes, I’m close, keep fucking me. Oh God,
oh God, I’m cummmmiiiiinnnngggg,” Sue screamed
pushing her hips up to meet her son.
“Here it comes Mom, here it comes, take it, take
all my cum,” Tommy responded, feeling the force
of his load traveling down the shaft and into his
mother’s body. Shot after shot of potent sperm
flowed from Tommy into his mother. Both were
moaning and shaking as their mutual climax flowed
from one body to the other.
Finally, Tommy collapsed in exhaustion on top of his
mother. Their lips met in a final kiss as they fell
off to sleep. Inside his mother, Tommy’s sperm was
beginning the journey that would change their lives
forever.
They had finally crossed the line.
THE END
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Part 2. What will happen?
Introduction
It had been two years since Tommy Ritter’s father
died. Tommy was sixteen when the tragedy occurred.
While Tommy missed his dad a lot, it was no
more than his mom did. Their life had been
ideal–living in the suburbs, two-car garage, and
nice schools. Everything was just about perfect until
the accident.
Bob Ritter had been driving home from work late
one night when a drunken driver crossed the
centerline and hit his car head-on. He never had a
chance. The police said that the other car had
been traveling at almost one hundred miles per
hour.
The funeral was difficult for everyone. Bob and
Sue’s relatives flew in from around the country and
were a big help to Tommy and his mother.
However, when the funeral was over, she and
Tommy had to go home and deal with the loss
alone. The accident changed their lives dramatically.
Tommy’s mom, Sue, had to go back to work to
make ends meet and they had to sell their house.
However, in the two years since Bob’s death, Sue
had done very well in her job and she had been
lucky in the stock market. She had purchased a
new house for her and Tommy, smaller than
before, but very comfortable nonetheless. The job
and investments provided enough money to enjoy life
and take an occasional vacation.
While the two years since the accident had been
financially stable, it was emotionally difficult. On an
emotional level, she and Tommy were still struggling.
They leaned on each other for support and therefore
had grown closer than the typical mother and
teenaged son.
Tommy Ritter became the man of the house
overnight, but he knew that he couldn’t make up
for the loss of his dad to his mother.
Tommy was a tall, handsome and lean boy at 6′
1″ and 175 pounds. He was bigger than most of
his classmates. However, while he appeared to be a
confident teenager, he was, in fact, very shy and
overly sensitive. Although, he had his dad’s
handsome face and the bright blue eyes of his
mom, he wasn’t comfortable with girls.
Tommy wanted to date, but every time he was
around an attractive girl, he would become tongue-
tied and embarrass himself. It was easier for him
just to avoid those situations. Besides, he almost felt
like he would be cheating his mom if he dated.
Now 18, Tommy had graduated from high school
with honors and had earned a football scholarship to
a local university. While he looked like the All-
American boy, he had never had a girlfriend. His
shyness was an incredible embarrassment for him.
The shyness was primarily the result of a slight
stutter that he had developed not long after his
father died. He had hid it successfully from his
mother so far and most of the time he could
cover it up. However, it tended to show up when
he was nervous and all too often, that was in the
presents of girls his age.
Sue Ritter was still a very attractive woman as well.
She was tall at 5′ 7″ with a well-proportioned
body. However, like most women, she was critical
of her body. She thought that her butt was too
round and that her breasts were too large. Her
tendency was to dress on the conservative side to
cover up her perceived flaws.
Sue had been desperately lonely since Bob’s death.
Although, she tried not to lean on Tommy too
much, he seemed to be the only one that really
understood. She didn’t have to explain to him how
she felt when she was sad, angry, or lonely. He
just knew. Sue thought that she could read Tommy
as well.
Out of sheer loneliness, Sue had tried dating.
Unfortunately, she hadn’t met anyone that she really
liked or connected with on an emotional level or
for that matter, on a physical level. Sue still had
strong sexual desires. However, she needed more
from a man. She needed tenderness and
understanding first. Most of the men she dated
seemed to think that because she was a young
widowed woman that she would jump into bed at
the drop of a hat.
Tommy tried to encourage her to go out and have
some fun, but whenever he suggested that she find
someone, she would always tell him that he was
the only man she needed in her life now. It was
almost as if she would be cheating Tommy or
somehow hurting Bob’s memory. While she knew
deep inside it was time to move on, she couldn’t
let go of the past.
Now 36, Sue worked hard to keep the family
financially solvent. Her job as a public relations
executive was rewarding but time consuming. She
had to work 12 hour days and sometimes Saturdays.
Tommy talked her into wearing sexier clothes and
had even convinced her that she looked great with
short skirts and low cut tops. He told her that she
needed to show off her assets to get ahead in
business. It had worked on the business level.
However, her good looks also attracted a lot of
unwanted attention from men.
Whenever Tommy would tell her that she should
date, she would turn his comments around and say
he should be the one dating.
Sue was more concerned about her son’s lack of
social development then she was about dating herself.
She wanted him to go out and have fun, yet he
would be home most weekend nights with her.
Chapter 1
One Saturday evening, Sue found Tommy sitting in
the living room watching TV as usual.
“Tommy, why are you sitting home tonight? Why
don’t you go out with someone?” Sue said, sitting
down next to her son and putting her arm around
his shoulders. They had this conversation almost
every weekend.
“Come on Mom, give me a break. I don’t need
to go out, besides, I’d rather be home with
you.” That had been his standard response. It was
a lame excuse and they both knew it.
“Tommy, you need to have friends, you know…
girlfriends,” Sue said in exasperation. Then she
looked at him seriously and said, “I’m worried
about you.”
“You seem to do okay without boyfriends. Why do
I need girlfriends?”
“Come on Tommy, that’s different and you know
it. I’ve already been married. Besides, I already
have a man. You!” Sue said, squeezing his
shoulder affectionately.
“Well, I have plenty time to date. Besides, I
already have a woman. You!” Tommy replied,
smiling at using his mom’s own words.
Sue sighed in frustration. “Well, we’re a fine pair
aren’t we?”
“Mom, you’re my best friend,” Tommy said
seriously, snuggling into her arm.
“And you’re my best friend too,” Sue said,
hugging him again. However, she couldn’t let it go.
“You still need to date. It’s not healthy.”
Tommy took a deep breath. “Mom…”
“What?”
Tommy’s mouth was opened but nothing came out.
His head fell back on the sofa and he closed his
eyes. His face seemed to color in embarrassment.
“It’s nothing. Never mind,” he finally said.
“Come on Tommy… please don’t close me out,”
Sue said, turning his face to her and looking into
his misty eyes. “We’ve always been able to talk
about anything. Haven’t we?”
Tommy had wanted to talk to his mother for a
long time about his shyness and the stutter but he
didn’t want to burden her. Additionally, he felt
embarrassed talking to her about girls. Now that he
had finally gotten up enough nerve to bring the
subject up, he knew he had to continue. “It’s…
it’s just that I’m… I’m not so hot with the
girls. I’m too shy and whenever I get around a
nice looking girl I… I… I… get tongue-tied,”
Tommy said, his eyes unable to meet his mother’s.
Sue was surprised but tried not to show it. She
had never heard him get tongue-tied before. “Now
wait a minute, you always say that I’m a nice
looking girl and you don’t get tongue-tied around
me.”
“I’m serious Mom, I don’t know what to do or
say around girls. I’ve only kissed two girls in my
whole life,” Tommy blurted before he could stop
himself.
“Really?” Sue said in astonishment. My God, he
was 18 and he had only kissed two girls, she
thought. He must be a virgin! The realization
shocked Sue. Then a bigger problem occurred to
her. “You like girls don’t you?”
“Mommmmmm! Of course I like girls,” Tommy
said, now totally embarrassed.
Sue sighed in relief.
“It’s just that… just that… oh hell… I haven’t
even been on a real date.”
“Wow Tommy, I had no idea!” Sue was unable
to hide the shock in her voice. “I’ve seen you
go out. You said you were going out with girls.”
“I’m sorry Mom, I lied. I go to the library or
the mall. I just didn’t want you to feel bad for
me. You have enough on your mind.”
Suddenly, Sue realized that she had neglected Tommy
since his father died. She had been foolish to think
that she could read him. She had been so busy
mourning her own loss, feeling sorry for herself and
working on her career that she had missed all the
signs. It was obvious now that he was very sexually
immature. God, how could I have been so stupid?
she thought.
The two of them sat silently for a long time.
Neither one of them knew what to say.
Finally, Sue broke the ice with an idea.
“Tommy, what would you think about you and I
going on a date?”
“Come on Mom! Get serious!”
“I am serious. You’re very comfortable around me,
so why don’t we go out? You can act as if I’m
your date. I can tell you what you need to work
on. After all, I still remember what girls like.”
Sue stopped when she realized that he might be
embarrassed to go out with his mother. “Uh…that
is if you wouldn’t be too embarrassed to be seen
out with your old mom.”
“God Mom, you’re not old. You’re the best
looking woman I know!” His face turned red as
soon as he said it.
“Thank you sweetheart, and you are the best
looking man I know. So why don’t we two good
looking people go on a date?”
Tommy was quiet for a few minutes, thinking.
Maybe it would be good for her to go out, he
thought. Besides, she might get off his back about
dating. It could be a way for him to help her.
Suddenly, he liked the idea. “Well… okay… I
guess it might be fun,” Tommy finally said in a
nonchalant tone.
“You don’t sound that excited,” Sue said with a
pout.
“That’s not it,” Tommy said quickly. But… but…
“What’s wrong sweetie?”
“I don’t… uh don’t know about that stuff. I…
I… I… would… uh… you know, feel silly if I
messed up. That would be embar… embarrassing,”
Tommy said, a stutter in his voice.
“There’s nothing you could do to embarrass yourself
honey,” Sue said patting his leg affectionately.
“Come on, let’s get dressed and you can take me
to dinner and a movie,” Sue said, reaching to the
table and picking up her car keys and flipping them
to him. “You can even drive, lover boy.”
“Mommmmm,” Tommy said, his face turning red
again. However, underneath the embarrassment he
was as excited as he had been in a long time.
Twenty minutes later, Tommy was pacing around the
living room nervously, waiting for his mom. When
he saw her come down the stairs, he started to
say something but stopped in mid-sentence with his
mouth open.
Sue had on a tight, white pull over top that was
low cut, exposing the upper swells of her breasts,
and a short black skirt and high heels. She thought
Tommy would like the outfit since he picked it out
for her.
“What’s wrong?” Sue asked concerned about the
look on her son’s face. Suddenly, she thought that
she had made a big mistake.
“Mom, uh, uh, you look, look…” Tommy
stuttered trying to tell her how great she looked.
“I’ll change,” Sue said, turning to go back
upstairs fearing that she had gone too far in trying
to look young and “hot”.
“No! You look beautiful,” Tommy blurted out.
Sue turned back around smiling. “Why thank you
sweetie, I thought you were upset with what I was
wearing.”
“Wow Mom, I hope some of my friends see me
with you. God, they will be so jealous!”
Sue felt her heart swell with pride and love.
“Well, let’s go make them jealous. For tonight,
why don’t you call me Sue,” she said with a
smile.
“Okay Mo… uh Sue,” Tommy answered. “Sue,”
he said again to himself, loving the way her name
rolled off his tongue.
Tommy rushed to the car in front of his mom to
open the door to let her in. As she sat down,
Tommy couldn’t help look at the expanse of her
thighs as her skirt pulled up. When he looked up
he saw his mom smiling at him. God, she saw me
looking up her skirt, Tommy thought. I can’t even
do that right, he thought, mentally chastising
himself.
As he drove, Tommy kept glancing over at his
mother’s legs. He felt a stirring between his legs
and was suddenly very confused.
Sue’s skirt had pulled up her legs, revealing her
tanned thighs. She tried to pull it down but the
bucket seats of her car made that difficult.
Tommy drove to a small Italian restaurant that they
went to on occasion. It was quiet and intimate with
a genuine Mediterranean look. The tables were
covered in red checked table clothes and each had
an old wine bottle in the center with a lit candle.
There was even a violinist playing music.
Dinner went great and was very relaxing. Sue even
let Tommy have a couple glasses of wine. Sue
wanted to make him feel more grown up. He
certainly needed some confidence building.
Sue had quite a bit more wine than Tommy. She
felt a little tipsy but also warm and relaxed.
Tommy had no trouble talking to his mom. The
wine had loosened his tongue just a bit. Besides, it
wasn’t like it was a real date, he thought.
They talked about school, friends, music, movies; all
the things that a boy and girl would talk about on
a date. Occasionally, Sue would point out things
about how he should act on a date. Like waiting
until his date had taken her seat before he sat
down or opening the restaurant door for her. She
tried not to be too critical. Not surprisingly though,
Tommy didn’t need much coaching. He was a
natural gentleman, like his dad.
For a little while, Tommy truly forgot that Sue was
his mom.
Sue also forgot for a short time that she was out
with her son. He suddenly seemed so mature. His
pretty blue eyes sparkled in the dim candlelight as
he laughed and his face lit up like a candle when
he smiled. God, he was handsome, she thought.
Suddenly, Sue felt a little shiver run through her.
When dinner was over, Tommy escorted Sue out to
the car, opening the restaurant door and hurrying to
open the car door.
Sue was just a bit unsteady on her feet. She knew
that she shouldn’t have had that last glass of wine.
When Tommy opened the door of the car, and his
mom slid in, he tried not to look at her exposed
thighs again. However, that was impossible. No
matter how hard he tried, his eyes went to the
dark area between his mother’s legs. The light from
a street lamp melted the shadows and Tommy drew
in his breath. His mother’s legs opened, revealing
the silky tops of her thigh high nylons, her smooth
thighs and then a pair of pale blue silk panties
hugging the pouch of her sex. She paused for a
second with one leg out of the car.
Tommy stood almost frozen, his eyes as large as
saucers.
“Well, are we going to the movies or not?” Sue
asked, again noticing that her son was looking up
her skirt. Another shiver ran through her. Now Sue
wasn’t sure whether the spreading of her thighs had
been an accident on her part or not. She felt so
naughty tonight. It was just a little innocent fun,
she told herself. The wine was making everything
seem all right.
Tommy’s shocked face turned scarlet when he saw
his mom watching him again. Suddenly, he felt
ashamed of his behavior. If I do this to my own
mom, what will I do when I go out on a date
with a real girlfriend? he thought.
At the movie theater they got sodas and popcorn
then found a seat near the back row. Since the
movie had been out for a while, the theater
wasn’t crowded. They practically had the theater to
themselves.
The movie was funny and light, making them both
laugh. About midway through the movie, Tommy
carefully raised his arm and put it on the back of
the seat behind his mother, his bare arm touching
her shoulders.
Sue didn’t miss the move and felt another of those
little shivers come over her.
At one point when they were laughing, Tommy
moved his arm until it was around her, his hand
hanging over her shoulder. His mom surprised him
by sighing and snuggled even closer into his arm.
Sue smiled to herself at her son’s boldness. She
felt so comfortable and loved at that moment. It
had been a long time since she felt like this.
Suddenly, Tommy realized that his fingers were
touching the top swell of his mom’s breast where
the soft flesh was exposed. He could feel his heart
begin to beat rapidly in his chest.
Sue felt the fingers but let them stay where they
were, as she didn’t want to spoil the mood.
Besides, it was just innocent fun and probably an
accident, she told herself.
Tommy could no longer concentrate on the movie.
Almost without his control, his fingers began to
move lightly back and forth across the exposed swell
of her breast. The movement was delicate, almost
imperceptible. Still, Tommy could feel it. It felt as
though his fingertips were on fire. Stop it! he told
himself.
After a few minutes, Sue noticed his fingers were
moving. It was a sensual touch, almost tickling. It
could still have been accidental. When she felt goose
bumps spring up on her chest, she knew that she
should stop him. However, she didn’t want to
embarrass him. He probably didn’t even know that
he was doing it anyway. It was just an innocent
touch. However, the tingling she felt between her
legs wasn’t so innocent.
Tommy’s hand was shaking, as his fingers grew
bolder. The tips of his fingers moved further down
until they were just barely under the elastic of her
top. Now, there was no doubt about whether or
not he was touching her accidentally. He couldn’t
believe how bold he was.
Sue’s breathing increased. She wanted to stop him
but it had been so long since someone that she
cared for paid attention to her. The brain of the
mother was in a battle with the brain of the
woman; a woman that had missed intimate touches
for so long. Sue began to squirm in her seat.
Incredibly, she could feel her panties getting wet.
When she felt Tommy’s fingers begin to move
further down, she reached up and grabbed his
hand, preventing any further movement. However,
she didn’t take the fingers out of her top, but
instead held them where they were, almost pressing
them to her soft flesh.
Tommy breathed a sigh of relief when his mother
didn’t chastise him. At one point, she let go of
his hand to reach for the popcorn in the seat next
to her. When she turned back, Tommy took the
opportunity to move his fingers downward again,
getting half his hand under the top before she
stopped him.
Now Sue held his fingers from the outside of the
top. Her own heartbeat had quickened.
Tommy felt like his heart was going to beat out of
his chest. His penis was now very uncomfortable in
his pants. He squirmed around, trying to find a
comfortable position. He couldn’t very well reach
down and adjust himself.
Sue held Tommy’s trembling hand tightly, knowing
that one more fraction of an inch and he would be
able to feel her nipple. In fact, his fingertips were
touching the large brown areola. She could feel the
hard nipples pulsing almost painfully. Now, her
breathing was as labored as Tommy.
The two sat almost frozen. When the tightness of
Sue’s fingers lessened, she felt Tommy’s fingers
begin to move downward again. She closed her eyes
and took a deep breath. She could feel the fingers
moving across the bumpy surface of her areola.
Then they split apart around the nub of her swollen
nipple..
Suddenly, the lights of the theater came on.
Sue jumped as if an electric shock had hit her.
She quickly pulled the hand from her top. She was
trembling as she sat in her seat waiting for the
few people in the theater to leave. Finally, she
stood on shaking legs and moved to the isle.
As they left the theater, Tommy had to walk behind
his mother in hopes that no one could see his
erection.
Sue took a deep breath and sighed as she walked
up the aisle in front of Tommy. She wondered why
he lagged behind her. She glanced back and realized
the problem that her young date had. She had to
restrain herself from looking back at her son a
second time. Suddenly, it was like she was in high
school again. It brought back so many fond
memories with Tommy’s father.
The ride home was very quiet. Tommy couldn’t
believe what had happened in the theater. It was
like a dream. Damn, he practically had his hand on
his mother’s bare breast and she didn’t stop him.
Yet, he still felt embarrassed and like a cad. His
mom had been nice enough to take him out and
this is how he repaid her.
Sue couldn’t believe what she had allowed to
happen either. Again, she told herself that it was
just innocent fun. After all, her son did need some
confidence building, she reasoned.
Tommy unlocked the door of their house, then
stopped and turned to his mom.
“Thanks Mom… uh Sue, I… I… I… had a
great time,” a little nervous stutter showing up in
his voice.
“I did too Tommy, you are a great date,” Sue
said sincerely.
Tommy stood nervously in front of his mom, his
hand’s fidgeting at his sides. He almost had an
overpowering urge to grab her and kiss her. He got
control of himself and asked, “Uh… does…
does… a guy get a kiss on the first… first
date,” Tommy blurted nervously. His heart was
beating wildly again. His knees felt like they were
going to collapse. When his mother didn’t answer
right away, he thought that he had blown it.
“Well, probably not on the first date, but because
you were so nice I guess one kiss couldn’t hurt,”
Sue said, her mind screaming No! No! The
beautiful evening, the date and the wine were all
working on Sue’s resistance.
Tommy’s heart skipped a beat. God, he was going
to do it he thought. He was really going to kiss
her. Suddenly, he was petrified.
“Well?” Sue said, her eyes closed, and her heart
pounding now. This was so wrong, she told herself.
“I really… uh… you know, I… I… don’t
know how.”
“Here,” Sue said, bringing her lips to her son’s.
His arms automatically went around her back. His
lips were hard and pressed harshly into his mom’s
soft lips.
“Wait,” she said and pulled back. “You don’t kiss
with your lips like that. Wet your lips and let them
relax,” Sue said in a motherly tone. Yet, this
wasn’t a motherly act.
Tommy did as his mother asked. He felt her bring
her lips to his again. This time he relaxed his and
pressed into her soft mouth. Suddenly, he was very
much aware of her breasts on his chest, her soft
lips, and the smell her sweet perfume. His head
began to spin.
Sue moaned as her tongue slid into her son’s
warm mouth. It was a reflex action and automatic.
She felt his tongue touch hers and a tremor ran
through her. For a moment, she was lost in the
sweet taste of her son’s mouth. Suddenly, she
pulled her tongue out of his mouth. She had totally
lost control for just a moment. She pulled her head
back and took a deep breath, trying to calm
herself. “Now that was better wasn’t it?” Sue said,
as innocently as possible, an uncontrollable quiver in
her voice.
“Great, let’s do it again,” Tommy said boldly,
pulling his mother to him again.
Suddenly, Sue could feel her son’s hard penis
pressing into her stomach. She shivered with
excitement at the thought that she could still turn
on a young man. Wait, her mind screamed, this is
my own son. She knew that she had to stop this
before it got out of hand.
“No! Stop!” Sue almost screamed. Then she
realized it sounded harsh and, her tone softened.
“One kiss on the first date. Don’t get greedy,”
Sue said pushing her son away playfully.
“Au shucks,” Tommy said, with his innocent smile,
trying to cover his excitement and disappointment.
Then he turned serious. “God Mom, I had fun
tonight. Can… uh… can we go on a date again
sometime, please?”
“Well, I guess so, if you treat me real nice,”
Sue said, pecking her son on the lips one more
time before entering the house.
That night, Tommy lay in bed with his hard penis
in his hand, thinking of his mom. All his fantasizes
until now had been about girls at school. Now his
mom dominated his thoughts. He could still feel her
soft breasts on his chest and her soft skin under
his fingers. If he could have only moved his hand
a fraction of an inch lower in the theater, he
would have touched the nub of her nipple. Even
now, he could still taste her lips on his and feel
her tongue in his mouth. It took only minutes for
him to squirt his juice all over his stomach. He
jerked off three times that night.
At the same time, Sue lay in bed with one hand
squeezing the same breast Tommy had touched. Her
other hand was forcing three fingers into her
sopping hole. She climaxed over and over until her
fingers and the sheets were soaked with her juice.
Then, suddenly she burst into tears. God, what
have I done? she thought.
Susan Ritter cried herself to sleep that night.
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Alyssa was 18. She was 5’ 7” with medium breasts and shoulder length died blonde hair with a few dark streaks here and there. She was sucking Max, her 17 year old brother’s, cock with tears streaming down her face. Meanwhile, a Dalmatian, Toto, was taking her from behind. She was in her room, and the door was locked. Her parents had gone out. Her brother had been getting more and more physically threatening since he was 14. He had tried things before and never succeeded. However, that night, when his parents went out, he bashed into Alyssa’s room and raped her along with Toto.
Max thrust in and out of Alyssa’s mouth. He forced it all the way into her mouth again and again. He loved the site of her gorgeous lips moving over his dick. Meanwhile, Toto was going nuts. He had already come about 3 times but just kept humping. It was that good to the dog. The dog howled and came for the fourth time, this time backing off and curling up in the corner. Max took her out of doggy style so that she was on her knees and then kept thrusting. “Oh shit!” he shouted as he pulled his dick out of her mouth. He came all over her. Her face, tits, and stomach were drenched in cum.
Just at that moment of relaxation for Max, Alyssa made a break for it. She bolted out the door. Max picked up his knife and chased after her. He caught up in the kitchen. “Bitch! You aren’t going to go anywhere…” he said. “FUCK YOU!!!!!” screamed Alyssa and she knocked the refrigerator on top of him. He died slowly and painfully under the refrigerator while Alyssa called the police.
3 weeks went by after the funeral. Alyssa was still shook up. They had sold the dog but there were reminders of Max everywhere. It was hard for her to stay calm when she was alone. She always felt like she was being watched, although, she never fully knew what by…
Alyssa was alone in her living room watching tv. She went into the kitchen to get some popcorn. She bent down to a cupboard with her ass sticking up in the air. The roundness of it pertruded through her short skirt. The refrigerator clicked on.
She made the popcorn and took it out of the microwave. She opened it up and spilled a bunch on the ground. Remembering the five second rule, she decided to quickly pick it up. When she did so, her partially buttoned v-neck sweater left her cleavage fully exposed. The refrigerator jumped about an inch. Alyssa, let out a brief shriek and fell back. Then went over to inspect the refrigerator. She opened it up and nothing seemed out of the ordinary. But the cold and the whisper of the air flowing inside gave her the heebie-jeebies and she closed it. She walked away, and as she did so, thought she heard her name in the low buzzing of the refrigerator and shuddered.
When she went back the tv was off. How did that happen? she wondered. She heard a loud clunk from the kitchen. She looked. The refrigerator had moved another inch. This was weird.
When she turned around, it jumped a full foot towards her. She screamed and ran, the refrigerator hopped along at incredible speeds and caught up almost immediately. It knocked her over. The carpet morphed into two tentacles which wrapped around her ankles and wrists and forced her into a doggy-style position. She screamed again and again but froze in fear when she saw that somehow, the refrigerator had grown a bright red penis. The tentacles climbed up her legs and ripped her skirt and panties off. Then, the refrigerator began to hump her. Soon, multiple penises began forming in the carpet as well. And they grew into tentacles. They stretched up like snakes, one going up her shirt to her bra, the other in front of her face. The tentacles began to make her blow and titfuck them.
The refrigerator slid in and out of her again and again. It moved faster. Alyssa’s whole body was shifting forward and backwards. The tentacle in her mouth pulled out and came on her face. The tentacle in her tits took this opportunity to extend into her mouth so that it was being blown and titfucked at once. The refrigerator began to hump even faster and stronger. So hard now that it lifted off the floor a little every time it thrust. Then, the refrigerator and tentacle came at the same time. And Alyssa passed out.
She woke up on the carpet with her skirt and panties ripped to shreds, and still covered in cum. However, the refrigerator was back in its place. She got up and stumbled to the upstairs bathroom. She cried as she washed up in the sink. She put on some sweat pants. And quickly went to the phone. It was dead. Then she thought maybe she could call the police through the internet. She went to her room and sat at her computer. The internet was working! She was saved!!!!! That was when the screen went dark except for four words: I’m not done yet.
Alyssa shrieked and got up. She backed away from the computer, horrified. “What are you???” she yelled. The computer than spoke allowed. “What’s a matter?” it said “Its just your older brother come to visit his hot sis from beyond the grave!” The tv turned on at full volume to a hardcore pornographic movie. She screamed but then she saw her salvation. The window was open!!! She made a run for it and leapt out the window. She hit the ground hard, but was ok minus a few scratches and bruises. She stood up, and that was when the next attack began.
She felt something fondling her breast and looked down. She could see nothing, and then she realized what was happening. Her own clothes were now trying to rape her. She could see her clothes indent in the shape of penises. Her shirt pulled up and immediately began fucking her tits. Everytime it thrust her shirt lifted up, exposing her stomach. Meanwhile, her sweatpants and underwear indented and began fucking her in both holes rapidly. She screamed and tried to run across the yard, but she fell. She ripped her clothes off and ran away naked.
Alyssa ran straight into the street. A car came to a screeching halt. A man got out startled by the naked girl. “Are you alright?” he asked halfway out of his door. Before she could reply though, the car door slammed on the man’s head, knocking him unconscious, and he fell to the ground. Then the door shut, and the car growled.
“No no no!” she cried and turned to run. However, there was no hope, and before she could get away, the car was upon her. It knocked her to he knees and mounted her doggy style, its two rear tires on the ground and its front up. Although it was leaning over Alyssa, the car was somehow shifting its weight so that it was just the right amount to not knock her down. However, she knew the weight was still there every time it thrust. Each thrust had thousands of pounds of force behind it. Her tits swung back and forth each time. It fucked her like a dog fucks a bitch. It increased its pace. It’s cock was larger than the refrigerator’s so this was even worse. Suddenly, the tires skidded in back, rotating at full speed, then the vehicle came. As it pumped into her its car horn went off and lights went to bright. Then, all at once they went off, and crushed Alyssa.
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